

Date: 09-19-06 - 03:47 pm Title: Lesson Plans
"We'll see" indeed. Get to the dinner!!!! :D Really liking this tak eon Evo!
Author's Response: I added some back story to Ororo and her sister. I always wished that it was a bit more explanation to that in the show. But oh no, that couldn't happen. Well booo on them.

Date: 09-18-06 - 10:48 pm Title: First Recruit
This seems quirky in a weird way and i like quirky..look forward to chapter 2
Author's Response: Chapter 2 is comming straigt up. Thanks for the review. I hope I can capture the spirit of evo and capture the characters.

Date: 09-18-06 - 01:39 pm Title: First Recruit
You pulled me out of lurking. I really have to jump back on the bandwagon reviewing, all the authors here deserve it. Okay, I really like where this is going, I really want to wait until the next chapter to understand who the first recruit was, but I like the fact that Patrick may be coming in contact with mutants other than Charles, and that's pretty awesome to see. It shows that they've been 'among' us non-mutants for a long period of time and not a new evolution of man, which is always interesting to see.
Anyway great post...and I can't wait for more.
VB
Author's Response: Hi there!!! It's nice to see you. I'm glad this caught your eye. As for the first recruit, well...that's left open for the reader to decide. Because I have this taking place in an evolution style timeline, I want to make the mutant situation realalistic. People will come in humans and mutants, humans and the x-men, x-men with other regular average muntants. All that good stuff. Thanks for the review. You'll see more soon.

Date: 09-18-06 - 08:23 am Title: First Recruit
Cool. I can see this as an EVO fic. I like the idea of the mail carrier doing some of the opening narrative.
Author's Response: Yea I looooved evo. I wanted to see more of it, something like a prequel. I wanted to see Ororo being recruited and I wanted to see her recruit Cyke and Jean, and now I will :D Viva la fanfic!
Oh yeah, Pat is my first attempt at a reacurring OC. So bear with me...