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Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-13-06 - 09:52 am Title: Mixed Messages

dang that was some fight, tro is so in for a good butt licking. logan is sure a white knight in this story and ro needs one right about now even if she doesn't know it. a true love story i see coming for these two. i love this story please keep it coming

Author's Response: Well, exactly; she does need someone to show her that she was settling for too little, too long, so a white knight, if you will. I'm glad you have been enjoying what I wrote so far, Chyti, thanks for visiting!

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-12-06 - 08:47 pm Title: Mixed Messages

yay!!!!!!!! *does a happy dance for a new chapter of money dance* it's really sad how often i've been checking the realm in the hopes for an update, and lo, here it is! i think what i love about this story (similar to 'never been one for wine and roses') is ro's vulnerability. she's fragile, insecure, unsure, stuck in a toxic relationship... so realistic. but what i like about this chapter is the way that it ends: perhaps ro is finding her strength, is learning to find a way to figure herself out. definitely love the almost-showdown between pietro and logan -- so good. i only wish that logan could've bloodied the bastard up a bit. maybe a real fistfight is coming somewhere down the road? *hopeful smile* anyway, cee, awesome chapter, yet again. can't wait to see where you take these two with all their baggage and issues.... seems like it's gonna be a ride!

Author's Response: Logan might have an opportunity to give him a piece of his mind and a boot up his butt in a later chapter...hmmmmm. Thanks for reading, I know I get long-winded, but I have been having fun with this story, and like Never Been, it's kinda coming from out of nowhere! Kinda like the Seinfeld show of fanfics, it's a story about nothing!!!! THanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: gits Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 11:05 pm Title: Mixed Messages

That was the PERFECT break up. Amazingly real. Especially with the messages being left, lol.

Author's Response: Thanks, kid. I didn't want her home whining "why ME?" She knows why her; she turned her back on his mess for too long and settled instead of getting out there and finding her prince, kissing the same old frog. The voice mails spoke to me, I don't know why. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 03:56 pm Title: Mixed Messages

Sooo glad she threw him out and didn't fall for any of his shit. What he said to her, his messages... he actually had the nerve blaming everything on her?! Bastard! Out! And don't come back! Ugh! Ro head-butting him was great :D I was worried she wouldn't be able to get away from him...
The morning with Logan was great though :) So much chemistry between them, mmmhhh...

Author's Response: I was afraid she wouldn't be able to get away from him either, for a moment, but she'll settle his hash, I promise! I pictured the head-butting scene and laughed out loud, it had to go in there, so sue me! I've watched too many bad eighties romantic comedies, I suppose...oh, well.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 03:23 pm Title: Sit Tight

Mmmmh, that was sooooo good :) Exactly what both of them needed. Exactly what I needed to read LOL :D I was hoping for something like this by the end of last chapter, but was afraid that something/someone might get in their way... Good thing it didn't :D Mmhhh, yum. Can't wait to see where they go from here.

Author's Response: You know me...I'm greedy about love scenes, half the time they consume most of the chapter that I insert them into, it's bad. I'm hopeless. Glad you enjoyed it, Steph!!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 11:45 am Title: Mixed Messages

Damn...Poor Roro...Pietro is such an ass. He cheats on her and then accuses her of doing the same thing. Man...MORE!

Author's Response: Ask and ye shall receive. I have a chapter I have been scribbling on paper. 'Tro will show up again, acting like a donkey, Jean'll be right there not acting much better, and we'll see more of Logan's back story.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 11:42 am Title: Mixed Messages

Wow.... Pietro is a colossal ass. The messages had me giggling and rolling my eyes at him. My favorite message, "This is bullshit..." To put all the blame on her is ridiculous. But that's what habitual cheaters do. They try to find every reason to not take responsibility for their actions.

Of course I loved 'Ro and Logan. I can't wait to see their relationship progress. I liked the small scene with Remy, too. :-)

Author's Response: My intent was to make each message more desperate, and more angry and self-absolving, because I can see a man acting like that after behaving like he has. Again, Logan's her shining knight to a point, but like anything else that I write, I like people to grow. She has to learn to rescue herself. Maybe Logan, eventually, too. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 10:49 am Title: Cold Feet!

What a lousy timing to find out your guy has been cheating on you. And that too in your own house and bed! But I'm glad she did find out and broke off with him. And Logan - mmmhhh :) They keep running into each other, heh.
Gonna read the next chaps soon. I got some time today, weee! Can't wait...
Oh yeah, Logan ironing his dress shirt - that's soooo sexy! :D

Author's Response: I see him as the kinda guy who came to have domestic skills by trial and error, and through heartbreak. Gotta love that Logan...whoo-hoo! He has a way of popping up everywhere...hmmmmmmm...

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 09:42 am Title: Mixed Messages

Damn. I'm so glad she didn't fall for any of his shit. This break up was heart wrenching even though it was necessary. I love the spin you put on this with japheth being her brother, and illyana having leuk.
Ro head butting pietro was classic. Why do I get the feeling that we havent seen the last of him though.

Author's Response: Yeah...I would have been mad at 'Ro if she had fallen for his line of shit. Really, really mad. I like some of those old characters a lot. I don't think we've seen the last of Mr. Ex-Boyfriend, either, somehow. The thing about relationships that last a long time is, who gets the friends when they split? That headbutt came out of nowhere...*chuckle.*

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-10-06 - 09:34 pm Title: Mixed Messages

OMG! There's so much to say. Please don't let Tro get away with the affairs and the bullshit treatment and the abuse. His father, Logan, and Ro need to drive stakes up his ass. I'm so mad at him I could light him on fire. He sounded like my father when my mother left his ass. Woah, flashbacks. The ridiculous passive aggressive behavior of turning his mistakes into his significant other's. :mad:

That was some good ass writing. Never have I ever been so mad at a group of words. I wonder what inspired you?

The begining was so perfect. Nice weather, good food, and the BEST FEUNG SHEUI EVER!!!!!!

I can't wait for more. TTYL

Author's Response: Different things inspire me. I'm not the only one of my friends with a marriage that I occasionally think belongs on Springer...there's always going to be a little of this, a little of that in my fics. Good feng shui? Cool...I know nothing about feng shui, but that works for me! TTYL, Reiko.

Reviewer: Davalyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-06 - 09:35 pm Title: No Man's Land

So I printed this story out so I could read it on the train and I absolutely adore the idea of this story. It's amazing. And Logan's character is just too swoon worthy for me. And I love the girls. Love it!

Author's Response: Logan will step up, I promise. I love alternate verse fics with these characters, which is of course why I love Animals (hint, hint...more???). The girls will make appearances throughout this story. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-06 - 02:48 am Title: Sit Tight

just wanted to let you know that i definitely make time to read this fic. it's so much fun but has enough serious moments to keep it realistic. i gotta say, i was really waiting for ro to slug pietro. or hey! maybe, in the future, wolvie and tro could have a DUEL! ahem. keep up the good work, cee!

Author's Response: a duel?! shoot, don't put it past me! maybe not in this fic, but it sure sounds fun. maybe in a future story, more of a oneupmanship thing. i like the idea of two alpha males having a pissing contest in a story, over a girl or not. thanks for reading, Charmer!!

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-06 - 02:32 am Title: Sit Tight

Pity sex, rebound sex, its all sex to me. lol Seriously though, I loved this chapter. My absolute favorite parts were when she told him he hadn't kissed her knee yet hen he did and when she told him that he didn't have to wait and he said "yer comin' with me"...*sighs*

Beautiful.



Author's Response: *heeheehee* thank you (blushes) She was teasing him and only half-meant it. But he delivered! That was actually quieter than most scenes I have written. I've been leaning away from sound effects ever since a review I got for Never Been, and surprisingly, I don't miss them. Much...

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-06 - 02:31 am Title: Cold Feet!

Let me get this straight...

1. Ro hasn't gotten off in months because Biscotti Boy is a selfish prick 2. Asshole is cheating on Ro in their house and left some skanky woman's thong under the bed...

And then he's got the nerve to be upset because Ro was dancing with Logan? Unfuckinbelievable!

I bet he wishes he kept his mouth shut. I only hope Ro doesn't forgive him ths time. Its time for Biscotti Boy to kick rocks.

Logan dressed in a charcoal colored suit...I'm loving the visual.

Author's Response: 1. Actually, he was cheating on Ororo in HER house! (don't hit me....whimpers) 2. yeah, the thong was skanky. I loved the visual of Ororo shaking it in his face, originally she was going to literally rub his nose in it, like a dog that made a mess. But they were at a wedding. She had a lot of dignity. Yes, Biscotti Boy, we hardly knew ye...and yeah, Logan, in my mind, looked foooooiiiiiinnnn in that suit. I love a buff, beefy man in a suit. Mmmmm.

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-06 - 02:08 am Title: Sit Tight

after what ro has been through i am glad that she is getting some good loving and attention. lo is the man in my book

Author's Response: yes, yes, yes. Logan is the man!!! Pietro was the guy who always said "don't get too close." Logan will jump in and snap her up, and won't let her get away. He's greedy, too!!!

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