

Date: 11-30-06 - 12:04 am Title: Sit Tight
1) I almost died laughing when you said Logan could hang a hat off his erection...that got my attention lol
2) this chapter was the best! I loved the simplicity of it, loved how Ro apologize to Logan for 'using' him
3) that was SO sad! When she told him he didn't have to wait for him...my heart just dropped.
4) I can't believe how much of a bastard Pietro was......
5) Go LOGAN! I've SO come off my Pietro/Ro ship...
Author's Response: 1. hey, the guy was hoping for a chance to be close to her all day long! 2. i wanted Ororo to get to the point, and not mince words. she's just lost her "placeholder" man that she's been settling for going on five years. Logan "rescued" her. That doesn't come without having to explain yourself later. 3. Logan would wait for Ororo, any length of time, if she treats him right in return. He needs that. He will in subsequent chapters. 4. Believe it. He always had that potential. Ororo is one of only, let's say, three people who have seen his good side in this story. That is a hint. 5. Yes. It was time for RoLo.

Date: 11-29-06 - 10:57 pm Title: Cold Feet!
1. tro didn't get enough....
2. Jean is so so vain! But i'll let it slide today...its her world everyone else is just lucky enough to grace it.
3. Logan...glad to see him back...he needs to show 'tro the claws lol
4. poor Roro...i liked her reaction...at first i feared she was ruin her best friends wedding..was she maid of honor?
5. So ready for rolo..Pietro can kiss my ass! And i hope he burns and tries in vain to get her back only to realize its too late
Author's Response: 1. yeah...hmmph. 2. yeah...hmmph again, that Jean. It will come back to bite her. 3. he will! he will! 4. yes, she was the maid of honor. she was determined not to ruin it. 5. yes, yes, yes!!!

Date: 11-29-06 - 05:34 pm Title: Sit Tight
**wipes fogged up monitor**
Wow.
Yeah.
Wow.
If I was a guy, I could hang a hat too.
Author's Response: He's half crazy about her already; he will suffer more...ahem...discomfort soon. I still laugh about Reiko's "redwood" from Aint No Business! Best euphemism for "got wood" so far!!! I've been trying to make my love scenes less clinical and read less like porn, but once you get started with the old "I can't move my legs" climaxes and other gritty details, it's hard to turn it off. My muses are dirty, DIRTY people!

Date: 11-29-06 - 04:43 pm Title: Sit Tight
Ay, muy caliente! I can't wait to see what else you have planned for these two?
Author's Response: Trouble. Lots of it. More steam, definitely love, but they will have to work hard for it. Thanks for reading, N'Dare D.

Date: 11-29-06 - 02:28 pm Title: Sit Tight
Read it...HOT!!! And MORE Rolo, in any way you see fit.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed hearing my muses murmur that scene in my ear. Particularly the scene with the Band-Aid, and her telling him to take his time with her. Ironic, since they hopped right into bed, but hey, you know me. Queen of One Night Stands in fanfic!!! I'm bad about that. I just like these two together.

Date: 11-29-06 - 07:54 am Title: Sit Tight
i like the last scene but was a little confused.Right before he backed away from her because she was on the rebound then they are in bed - just a little fast for me. I am interested dinn how they deal with it in the morning. Ororo still has to deal with Pietro and I don't get the feeling that he is going to be an easy guy to get away from.
Author's Response: That is fine. Confusion just challenges me to work harder on the next installment. I have a bad, BAD habit of rushing a love scene for love scene's sake. I could have had these two wrangle with each other's hangups a little longer, but I wanted to see how they handled the repercussions after giving in to their physical needs. And you are right, Pietro will be a hard guy to get away from. The morning after will be both joyous and ugly, and offer a different confusion. I had Ororo and logan hop into the sack early on in Rubbing Me the Wrong Way, too, but let's face it, sometimes people are impulsive. Booty call one moment, psycho person tossing your laundry out the door the next...sigh. Thanks for reviewing, Mercy.

Date: 11-28-06 - 01:06 pm Title: Sit Tight
I really liked how you showed Logan's sensitivity to Ororo's needs. The end of the chapter was about more than sex. It showed that there is someone out there that will value Ororo and won't take her for granted.
Author's Response: Well, yeah. That was what I wanted. I think that is what we all want, someone to value us, and for the reasons why to be clear. Logan will ponder that a little soon. He wants someone who will value him, too. He has a past...hint, hint.

Date: 11-28-06 - 12:13 pm Title: Cold Feet!
Damn! That was AWSOME! Can't wait for MORE ROLO!
Author's Response: ...have you read chapter seven??? Go ahead, I dare you!!!

Date: 11-27-06 - 11:33 pm Title: Cold Feet!
I love the visual I get from your description of Logan all dressed up *fans herself*. I feel soooo bad for Ro. Not only did she discover her man is a lousy bum, she had to find out on her best friend's wedding day which in itself is a very emotional day for everyone involved!
Anyhoo, thanks for passing the pipe ;) *waits for the next hit*
Author's Response: *coughs and falls over* Here, take a toke!!! (grins) And here is the next hit, just uploaded chapter seven. My intent was to turn Ororo's world on its ear so she won't continue to settle for the illusion of happiness with 'Tro. Hope I succeeded!

Date: 11-27-06 - 09:16 pm Title: Cold Feet!
More! More! I love it!
Author's Response: Goodie! Thank you, thank you!

Date: 11-27-06 - 03:37 pm Title: Cold Feet!
I flove Ororo and Logan! That was such a Knight in Shining Armor moment and I loved every minute of it! I was really hoping 'Ro slapped Pietro a few times, but I'll just leave that to my imagination. It's funny that Scott noticed something was bothering 'Ro, but Jean didn't.
Can't wait to see what 'Ro's friends have to say about Pietro's infidelity? And is Emma the hussy with the tacky thong? I wonder...Great update!
Author's Response: I love Ororo and Logan too. I can see him coming to her rescue more than once, and growing to care about her in the process. Yes, she could have slapped him, but showing him that she knows what a player he is was good enough for me. Jean is still absorbed in the glow of her wedding and all of the trappings that go with being a newlywed. She'll get an education, too, on being a better friend. Hint...Emma ain't the hussy.

Date: 11-24-06 - 04:35 pm Title: Butterflies
Again, what an ass! I had a feeling already but wasn't sure where that came from... He's such a bastard! Is that chick the only one or does he have a new one everytime he comes home late? Gah!
LOVED the effect Jean's voice and behaviour had on Logan LOL Good thing he's not interested in her at all anymore :D
Nice effect they have on each other already, heh. Yay, he'll come to the wedding, weeee :) RoLo action ahead...? *makes puppy dog eyes* I don't want her to be with that jackass any longer! Too bad Ro didn't see him with his newest fling herself... she needs to know though. Gah! What an ass *grumbles*
But wow, I actually caught up reading this story, yay... Now I want more! :D
Author's Response: Pietro has been playing while the cat was away, a lot. He's been in control of the relationship, starting with when Ororo took him back. There was a little Jean bashing in this story, not overt, but just enough to show that she's wrapped up in herself and ignoring her best friend's unhappiness while she's playing Bridezilla. That will come back to bite her eventually. Glad you have stuck with it this long!

Date: 11-24-06 - 04:12 pm Title: Awkward
Ugh, Pietro is such an ass. Always thinking about himself... Ro doesn't really want to have a ring from that guy?! ... Oh man, I hope she'll come to her senses and just throws him out or something.
I had to smirk at the fast channel flipping though. That's so typical man! Well, mine does that all the time and it unnerves me to no end :)
Harry's, heh - so that's where they'll meet again, right?...
Author's Response: YUP! Ororo is realizing things the hard way. She loved him the first time around, but she's getting an education on how he really is after taking him back. It'll hurt, big time. And the channel flipping, naturally, is straight out of my own house!!!

Date: 11-24-06 - 03:50 pm Title: Six Degrees
Small world indeed. I love how they all seem to be connected to each other somehow - same working place, same gym, same friends... So, where will they meet again, now that he gave her the Daffy Duck band-aid LOL... at the wedding perhaps? Would be nice if she'd go there alone, so Logan had someone to dance with, heh... if he dances that is... and if he decides to go there :)
As for Vic... *rolls eyes* LOL Love him! :D
Author's Response: They will meet at the wedding. Ororo won't quite start out alone. Yeah, they are all connected on some level. The band-aid was silly, I will admit it, but I like to set the stage of Logan kissing her and making it better, starting with the small stuff like that. Thanks for reading!

Date: 11-24-06 - 03:27 pm Title: Trippin’
I'm glad I don't feel sick myself right now LOL Reading about drunken girls wouldn't be such a good idea otherwise... *ugh* ;)
MMMMhh, you found a way to bring Vic into this :D Short scene but he's still so droolworthy, heh *drools* Can't help it, I love the big hunk :)
Pietro's "nearly hairless" body made me "eeeek" LOL *shudders* So not my type :D I need me some hair, mmmhh...
Sooooo, Logan's thinking about her,eh... I wonder when and how and where they'll meet again.
Author's Response: They will meet again! In a couple of the least likely of places. 'Tro I can't picture as having a lot of body hair, I see him as being sculpted and smooth for some reason, maybe with a cute little happy trail and a sprinkling of hair on his legs, but not much more. The contrast between him and Logan needed to be evident for me, I don't know why. Vic was fun. I have met guys like that in college, at bars, and in menial labor-type jobs I have held. Braying, macho, and occasionally right on point is what I was going for with him. Glad you liked him.