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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-06 - 02:34 pm Title: No Man's Land

Oohhhhhh *drools* That was soooo goooood!
I was expecting Logan to be the stripper at first and wasn't sure if I was actually looking forward to that LOL I just couldn't imagine him like that. So I was relieved when it turned out to be Remy :) Logan the chaperone, that was perfect! No wonder Ro was sort of fascinated by him and felt like dying when he gave her that smile. OMG! *fans herself*


Author's Response: It's funny. The consensus for everyone has been that they thought Logan was the stripper at first! But no, I could not picture him that way either, even with my overactive imagination. I see Lo as the strong, silent, growling type. Yup, she will be VERY fascinated by him as time goes by.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-23-06 - 10:41 am Title: Butterflies

Love this story! But the exposition is getting kinda long...Bring on the ROLO already!!

Author's Response: I'm trying, I promise! The exposition sucked me in. That happens sometimes. My brain goes into background, character history overdrive and I start over-adjectiving my readers to death. It's like a disease...*hack, cough.*

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-23-06 - 03:02 am Title: Butterflies

NOOOOOoooo on the nasty Tro/Ro breakup and YEEEEeeeeeeesss on the awsomeness of the Logan possessiveness.

Author's Response: yup. Logan will have his chance in the next chappy.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 10:22 pm Title: Butterflies

1) *shakes head* you gave into the cult that is myspace? lol It tried to get me but i showed it whose boss lol
2) damn! 'Tro was harsh! And he didn't mince words....ouch!
3) I almost hate Jean...Scott does worship her.
4) NO WAY!!!!
5) he's a cheater? what a scumbag...i hope its like his cousin or something lol i know likely story.
6) damn...i don't think i'll get over this. Good thing i'm over the 'Ro and Pietro...bring on rolo

Author's Response: 1. sigh. picture me with a shaved head in orange pajamas, selling violets at airports...sheesh. that site sucks but its addictive. 2. 'Tro won't be so smug for long. 3. Jean has her sweet moments, but there is a teeny smidgen of bashing ahead. 4. yes, way! 5. if there wasn't something wrong with Pietro, this would be strictly Tro-Ro. Had to set the conflict, more or less. Still struggling with it, so sue me. 6. Yup! '

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 08:19 am Title: Butterflies

Funny and unique as usual, but quick question--who the feck actually drinks Zima? :P That shit is nasty. I do like this story, it's funny and fresh--but I seriously miss your darker, more comic book oriented fics. You seem to get inside the books and characters in a way that I adore. But, that doesn't mean you stop this, uh-uh. no way--just means you have to work double time. LOL. ;)

Author's Response: Who the feck, indeed. Californians drink that stuff like it was 7Up. I've been in a dark mood. Problem is, Wounded is mired in my usual case of writer's block, so I am letting off some steam with this one. Abandon is on hiatus until it speaks to me again. And Just Passing Through, sadly, is out on my AFF.net crap pile. Not to worry, BW has taken a break from reading my stuff til I quit my "chick lit" binge! I won't leave him, or you, hanging for too much longer. Viva la angst fic!!! Evil Ceenote shall rise again!!!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 07:05 am Title: Butterflies

No good bastard! Oooh, I can't wait until 'Ro finds out what Pietro has been doing. I seriously need some quality RoLo time. Their short interaction just left me wanting more. If St. John was manning the door, where the heck was Vic?

This is really good!

Author's Response: Ask for RoLo, and thy shall be blessed...or something like that. It's on the way. Vic was out messin' around, he'll show up again, those two aren't always gonna be in the same place. Although Vic giving the ladies a hard time is actually kinda fun. Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 06:09 am Title: Butterflies

Why that lousy, no good, two timing, arrogant ... you get the point! And that platinum blonde chick had better not be who I think she is!

CeeCee, your stories are more addicting than crack! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll "pass the pipe" when I update with the next chapter, I promise! Thanks for reviewing. The chick with Pietro isn't important in terms of who she is; the whole point is that he's steppin' out on 'Ro.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 06:58 pm Title: Awkward

Tang! For some reason that's so cute to me just imagining Tang in their cupboards. After reading through to the end however, I've learned it must help stave off a diabetic episode, very informative.

You just write so completely, CeeCee taking us into these characters life as if we're flies on the wall. Your knowledge of everything you write is excellent as if you've lived it or either you've superb research skills. Another great chapter and nothing but admiration for your skills.

Author's Response: my pops used to drink it when his sugar got low, he is type one diabetic, like 'Ro's dad in this. my mom said once he had an attack while he was mixing his Tang, and kept slopping the juice out of the cup. thank you for the vote of confidence and lavish praise. it means a lot coming from you.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 06:41 pm Title: Six Degrees

Excellent chapter! Elsie Dee is one of my favorite characters so it was nice to see her here - fun. The whole kids thing, Luna, Selene's kid! LOL! Good fun. Great dynamics between Vic and Petey too, loved the steroid comment. Really loving Pietro here which makes it so interesting for me. Well done as always.

Author's Response: thank you, darlin. i like the idea of high maintenance stage parents and pageant moms in this. i needed some "background noise" for my plot.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 03:12 pm Title: Awkward

1. I was hoping she was pregnant...*sigh*
2. still don't want rolo lol
3.Pietro is a jackass!
4. Five year and no ring? hell no...she better get to walkin...she is wasting all of her youth on him...
5.I'm still hoping that Pietro will step up....

Author's Response: 1. nah. not yet. 2. i kinda do, but not yet. 3. yes, he is. i like him that way. 4. yes, she will learn that soon... 5. he might, but not for 'Ro.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 01:59 pm Title: Awkward

Wow...if was Roro i would've left Pietro a lng time ago. He sounds like a college student, and like he's cheating on her. Get on with next update! I want the ROLO!

Author's Response: he is acting like that, yes. but that is fine. makes the buildup worth building up to. should be interesting, i hope.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 10:24 pm Title: Awkward

I'm worried,why was Tro late that day? *Inhales* Uh oh... I love Eric, omg. He's the ideal father-in-law-ish guy.

Author's Response: Eric will be riding Pietro's butt in this story, like he does in the books. They are at odds.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 08:06 pm Title: Awkward

Pietro is a jerk! He's really got that its all about me thing down pat and the only time he wasn't like that was when Ororo sugar went low.

I know she loves him and all and I know she's just not going to be able to turn that off over night, but she seriously needs to realize that this relationship isn't going anywhere.

We're off to Harry's.

Author's Response: she knows it. she just has to act on it. i love these two, though, even as individual characters.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 07:37 pm Title: Awkward

Wow... 'Tro's insensitivity knows no bounds does it? I just kept reading it thinking, "He can be a real jerk!" I love how you make the reference to his mutation with his abruptness in this fic. He's always so quick w/ everything. Poor 'Ro. Does she ever "finish" when they have sex? Maybe a grumpy radiology tech can help her w/ that. *wiggles eyebrows*

I'll wait as patiently as I can for the next update!



Author's Response: His abruptness will be an obstacle for them. He is "fast" in terms of getting in her good graces early on in the relationship, but he will be slow to commic. Ironic, eh? She finishes sometimes, but that will be her clue that things are not on the up and up. *wiggles eyebrows back*

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 04:14 pm Title: Six Degrees

1...can you do rolo later? lol this is all your fault! I'm liking Pietro...doesn't seem much of an ass like he did in the first chapter.
2.Never thought Logan in a hospital as inworking there....different
3. Victor was funny lol..jackass
4. Is she pragnant? Is that why she got dizzy for no reason? I bet she is pragnant! although she did say she was on the pill...but that isn't 100%

Author's Response: 1. yes, i will do rolo later, because i also like 'Tro. he will have his assholic moments, though. 2. why not? i figure him to be versatile, and to be able to have a physical job like being an LVN. 3. yeah. gotta love vic. 4. nope, not yet.

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