

Date: 05-16-07 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
GAH! Logan, GO BACK! GO BACK!!! FOR THE LOVE OF PETE, GO BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...so did I say this was an excellent chapter??? I love Vic's thoughts on their relationship and that building, gut-clenching knowledge you immediately get that things are gonna get much, much worse for our favorite couple.
This reminds me a bit of Christian Slater and Patricia Arquette in "True Romance." Lots of recklessness and tension. I'm glad this is in my favorites.

Date: 05-16-07 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
can't speak.. . . crying. very good end to a well-written chapter. please keep updating.

Date: 05-16-07 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
MORE, MORE, I NEED MORE! This story so ROCKS and I can't wait to read the next chapter. AUUUUURGH HE LEFT HER and Victor is THERE!
(breathe, breathe) Write quickly please, Note the "Please" part.
Hugs.
Rolletti

Date: 05-16-07 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Do not leave us hanging like that :O UPDATE PLEASE!!

Date: 05-16-07 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - Goodbye
Argh! Victor saw them together! Argh! Victor knows where she is! Argh argh argh! Cliffhanger!

Date: 05-14-07 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen - The Reunion
Oy! Poor 'Ro...she's gonna end up swimming with the fishes! The scene with Vic and the girl who looked like 'Ro reminded me of a Sidney Sheldon novel called Bloodline. Snuff films and identical corpses showing up every few chapters or so. This is just as compelling.
Ororo and Charles...I never saw that coming, but it fit. Perfectly. I wrote a "CharRo" fic a long time ago that sucks eggs, but I had fun writing it at the time.
Keep it coming. That last line was great!

Date: 05-14-07 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Twelve - Nobody's Business
Man. Only you can make me drool over a love scene and make me feel paranoid about 'Ro's psycho ex showing up on their doorstep at the same time. Once again, we see that side of Logan who's beginning to not only crave her, but need her.
And of course, I love Billie Holiday. Strange Fruit makes me want to cry every time I hear it. You just can't beat that beautiful old jazz that sounds like the person singing it wants to just about die, and take you with 'em.
Vic didn't kill Cyke and Jeannie. Fancy that??? I'm laughing that he didn't want to dust them as a warm-up! On to the next chapter!

Date: 05-14-07 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen - The Reunion
Oh how mean and cruel you are to end it like that! I get so excited every time I see another posted chapter of this story, I'm stll giddy with glee. LOL
Awww Logan gave her his dog tags, that's soooo special. I'm really looking forward to reading the next surprise. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Rolletti

Date: 05-14-07 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen - The Reunion
Yeech! A bit Oedipal innit? Poor confused girl. Good thing Charles straightened her out...for all the good it did. I wonder what she is going to tell Charles about Victor. I wonder how Logan is taking the loss of her. Good chapter!

Date: 05-10-07 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Twelve - Nobody's Business
I find it so sweet and a little crazy that Logan would kill for her. ride or die that's some kind of love
Victor is sooo creepy. fool needs a life or better yet he needs to be locked up.

Date: 05-10-07 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Eleven - The Ride
whoa! its like that??!
I loved that he told her that he would make all the bad away and i feel as if this is a turning point and its about to get ugly.

Date: 05-06-07 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Twelve - Nobody's Business
Amazing!

Date: 05-06-07 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve - Nobody's Business
Frikin WOAH! Great JOB! (fanning myself) I love thier relationship and how it's building. Thanks for sharing an amazing story. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Rolletti

Date: 05-06-07 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve - Nobody's Business
Frikin WOAH! Great JOB! (fanning myself) I love thier relationship and how it's building. Thanks for sharing an amazing story. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Rolletti

Date: 05-06-07 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve - Nobody's Business
Vic is in a killing mood, no surprise there...but it seems that Logan is too. Hmm...interesting. Thanks for another good chapter!