

Date: 04-30-07 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter Ten - Victor's Arrival
I wonder if Vic will believe that 'Ro's not there. I also wonder if Jean told the Professor about 'Ro running away again. I wonder what 'Ro will say to Logan. Good set up chapter. I look forward to the next update. :)

Date: 04-30-07 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter Ten - Victor's Arrival
I'd love if this was a happy ending... but I'm really starting to doubt that... Still, great chapter!

Date: 04-30-07 - 08:09 am Title: Chapter Ten - Victor's Arrival
this is one of my favorite stories. i love how you are slowly building to a major confrontation.
please. . .please keep the updates coming.

Date: 04-29-07 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Ten - Victor's Arrival
This is getting real good. I'll be looking, for a knock-
out -claw fisted fight, I hope soon. Write more ch soon.

Date: 04-29-07 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Ten - Victor's Arrival
Love the backstory about Vic and his abusive dad. Like how it parallels Logan's background a little. Ororo kissing her mother to make her better just breaks my heart. I know the next update will be fabulous, because this one was! Good job, too, on Logan internalizing his pain and taking it out in the gym while he was boxing.

Date: 04-29-07 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
I wanna wake up like that!! O.o
Thanks for teh dedication and I LOVE this fic, as you know!! You so rock socks, babe!

Date: 04-28-07 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Eight - Show Me
It seems they both had a really tough time of it. The safety and comfort of their relationship is clear to see. Good job!

Date: 04-27-07 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
Dang too bad that their good start to the day ended badly. It could have been worse had Logan not realized that 'Ro was having some difficulty. Good on him. I wonder what she will do to try to keep Vic from locating her. Good chapter!

Date: 04-26-07 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
i like the fluff i dont want the drama to start :( I could picture Logan coming 'get her' and she's thinking of when Vic used to do that.

Date: 04-26-07 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
SO enjoying this. Ororo feeling Vic breathing down her neck gives you chills, that and Logan catching on. Well paced, and also well beta'd, I didn't see anything out of place at all. The scene by the window was really something; it's like the two of them don't want to hide their feelings from the world...literally, ahem...
Good stuff. Can't wait for ten.

Date: 04-26-07 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
loved the chapter! Can't wait to read chapter 10

Date: 04-26-07 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
Great chapter! I hope thing work out for them. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Date: 04-26-07 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
"Big, scary and blonde..." That's the perfect way to describe Victor. I'm loving the fact that Logan wants to be with Ororo. I love the two of them in this fic. Both tortured but willing to give in to their urges for one another. I can't wait to read your next chapter. :-)

Date: 04-26-07 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Nine - No Nightmares
Sqeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I'm so thrilled with this chapter and I'm so lovin it. OMGOSH, the window scene was frikin hot! I can't wait to read the rest of the upcoming chapters.
Rolletti

Date: 04-24-07 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter Eight - Show Me
Beautiful. Just beautiful. This was haunting...