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Date: 03-21-11 - 08:34 pm Title: Walk don't run

Awww, you disappoint me when it came to Sabretooth. *sigh*

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Date: 03-21-11 - 08:32 pm Title: Dead but still Beautiful

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy! Sabretooth! I love fics like this!

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Date: 03-21-11 - 08:23 pm Title: Hurt

OMG! I was going to write a fic like this, but I never could fogure out how to make it fit without Storm dying. Thanks for writing this.

Reviewer: ebs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-01-06 - 11:44 am Title: Breath at the end of a kiss

great story, really I love this pair.

Reviewer: topeka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-03-06 - 12:38 am Title: Hurt

more than likely he wouldnt have made a mistake because he could have sensed who she was, other than that i thought the story was really good, and i can over look that little bit of info to enjoy it. if it was there then there wouldnt have been a story really. does this make any sense? make a long sory short i did like it, please continue witht the good work.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 09:56 pm Title: Breath at the end of a kiss

That was sweet. Boy meets girl, boy stabs girl, boy and girl kiss. :)

Reviewer: lyner Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 09:38 pm Title: Breath at the end of a kiss

wow, i really like this! :D

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 07:34 pm Title: Breath at the end of a kiss

Aha! The kiss of the title! Yay!

Nice to see Ororo comforting Logan after his nightmare, returning his earlier favor. Okay, now you can write us some more stories!!!

CeeCee

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 07:30 pm Title: Flying without wings

Boy, that Logan sure falls in love fast! (grin)

There were tiny, tricky bits of grammar here. They are minor enough that they don't hurt the story in terms of reading it, since the narrative, dialogue and scenes are fantastic, so good job.

“I was hungry.” Her soft African accent highlighting her words. - change "highlighting" to highlighted. Or, say "I was hungry," she replied, her soft, African accent highlighting her words.

Rummage needs another 'm.'

This sentence has a tiny glitch: Ororo was sat at the table eating a piece of coffee cake. Take out "was."

Nitpicking over. The rest is just compliments. You did a good job.

Reviewer: KendalLogan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 03:20 pm Title: Hurt

I loved this story, so beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's my first X-Men fic.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 12:05 pm Title: Walk don't run

ACK! I hate Cliffys!!! Come back and finish this.

Author's Response: I've posted chapter 6!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 11:56 am Title: Hurt

Wow, this was really good. It was a mainly unexplored path. Way to go! Is there more? Please???

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