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Reviewer: rory Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-16-07 - 10:53 am Title: Black as death

You should add more soon

Reviewer: ororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-28-06 - 08:39 pm Title: Black as death

i would like to know when this will be finished! (it was good)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 07:06 pm Title: Black as death

Very short but promising.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-30-06 - 07:22 pm Title: Black as death

Good first person narrative, it pulls the reader in quickly.

Hyphenate "smoke-filled" if you get a moment, it is a compound adjective in the tense you are using it in.

I hope you write us more of this neat story. I love the title, too.

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