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Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-07 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter One: Without Exception

All I can say is, GO RO! *pumps fists in air*
This chapter reminded me of something:
WHATEVER LOLA WANTS, LOLA GETS
Dinah Shore

Whatever Lola wants, Lola gets
And little man, little Lola wants you
Make up your mind to have, no regrets
Recline yourself, resign yourself you're through

I always get, what I aim for
And your heart and soul, is what I came for.

Whatever Lola wants, Lola gets
No use to fight,
Don't you know you
can't win
You're no exception to the rule,
I'm irresistable you fool, Give in
.... Give in

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-07 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Four: Weakness

Wow. *blinks*

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-07 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter Four: Weakness

o.O

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!!

**off to take a cold shower**

I love how she didn't cave, didn't offer tenderness. Just a cheeky "Thanks" and off she went. That's my girl. LOL

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-07 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Four: Weakness

I love how Ororo is fighting for what she wants...Logan back! Question...did Ororo's actions have anything to do with the phone call she got ust before she tracked Logan down? Regardless, Logan can't resist Ororo when she is bent on having him (LOL). I just love it.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-07 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter Four: Weakness

Punching Bag $330
Sundress on sale $40

Ororo, "Thanks."

PRICELESS!

Author's Response: *gigglefit* That's hysterical!

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-02-07 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter Three: Memories

what is going on and what does betsy know that ro doesn't and i too like pete and ororo they are so cute with the dancing and everything

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-07 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Three: Memories

Gack.

The tension is killing me. Really. This is good.

Not many people connect Peter and Ororo together. Usually it's more Scott and Ororo. Personally, I think I like Pete better.

Excellent work. I'm intrigued at where this came from, and where it's going.

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-06 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter Three: Memories

Waaaaaaaaa you are going to kill me with your angsty stories. WHY, WHY? sniff

Go on, just go on and rip my heart out with another chapter, just go.

Rolletti (cry, cry, cry)

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-06 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter Three: Memories

**kicks Logan** Stoopid monkey.

Emotional as always. i do believe you get a kick out of breaking our little reader hearts. :P

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-06 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Three: Memories

Awww, I love it when you write Pete. He's so awesome. I want one of him.

Betsy awesome as well.

I love this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-06 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter Three: Memories

we need some backstory here!!!!! i liked this chapter the best. what's betsy's role in all this?

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-06 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter Two: Humanity

I hope that Logan is able to get some help with his problem. Or that Betsy breaks down and gives Storm a call before she does something she may regret. *Burnz bites a nail in anxiety*

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-06 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter Two: Humanity

Wow. Heart reanding and emotional. It's good to see Logan suffering (I know I'm a bitch) but seriously--he asked for it., :P I can't wait for more of this delicviously angst ridden story. :X

Reviewer: Neo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-06 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter Two: Humanity

I think I understand what might have happened with Logan, but then again I am usually wrong. So I will be staying tuned for updates cause I need to know....and you have me hooked.

Excellent first two chapters..

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-27-06 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter Two: Humanity

GOOD!!, update soon. ;)

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