

Date: 06-13-07 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: A Child's Fate
Beautiful.
.....Um Trish and Hank update perhaps? :)

Date: 06-13-07 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: A Child's Fate
Great read gaineewop, I loved it. The end of Trask and Styker. Wow, Storm was just raw in this chapter absolutely raw. I'm totally impressed by the fact that she got up after birth, destroyed those in her way, get her kid, and about ready to escape on her own. Wicked cool, never test the will of a mum. This was great. :D I can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter is definitely a fave in the entire story. Charlie's cute too. :D

Date: 06-13-07 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: A Child's Fate
I don't know whether to laugh or cry! This was excellent, Gainee. Logan and a burp cloth...what a sweet image! This has been such a great story for so many reasons, so on the one hand I'm sorry to see it end, but on the other, I love how you brought this to resolution with so many outcomes that leave the reader satisfied. There wasn't one loose end left untied. I can't wait for the last little chapter, either, but this was awesome. Piotr cutting loose and taking names was of course fabulous! And I love Bobby with "HI?" That summed up my reaction perfectly!

Date: 06-07-07 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mixed Blessings
I fuckin love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 06-06-07 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
Oh man! The suspense is killin' me!! Good chapter!

Date: 06-05-07 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
OMGOODNESSSSSSSSSSSSS I'm lovin this story and I'm going crazy at the same time in anticipation.
(screaming) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Great chapter once again, Gainee
Rolletti

Date: 06-04-07 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
Ohhhhhhh, the suspennnnnnnnnnsssssse!
Ororo was close by, Logan thought, and mighty pissed off. I love that. I also love Piotr threatening to duct tape Kitty to Jimmy and tape them both to a wall. Priceless. Once again, Trish and Hank had me sighing with a mix of heartbreak and hope, I love those two, including their little eccentricities, like Trish and her orangey eggs. You've been so prolific and consistent lately, which is an amazing thing, being able to juggle a half a dozen fantastic stories at once and never lose anything from any of them, ever.

Date: 06-04-07 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!! PLZ PLZ, I HOPE RO'S ALRIGHT! THIS IS SO GOOD! No not good, THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME...sorry for my french

Date: 06-04-07 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
Yes! Thats what I'm talking about. I hope they are able to get the baby too! Please don't kill Ororo off.

Date: 06-04-07 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
oh my , why does it have to end....update soon, i really can't wait , what will happen? ooooh pls don't kill the ororo and the child...plssss....

Date: 06-04-07 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
Oh Lordy. I'm gonna have a heart attack f you don't update soon. This chapter was awesome!

Date: 06-04-07 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Ororo
Goddamn cliffhangers. You're mean!
I usually don't like Trish in the comics, but you portray her well.

Date: 05-20-07 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Stryker
OMGOSH!!!!!!!!! You came back with a bang girl. I L O V E this story and i'm just bubbling over with excitment waiting for the next chapter. I thrilled with Kitty coming into her own, and I love the silent scream for Logan from Ororo. HE'S GONNA KICK BUTT DUDE!
Rolletti (bouncing on toes)
PS PLEASE DON'T LET OUR SWEET FAVORITES AND THE BABY DIE! NOR KITTY'S BABY! DO I HAVE TO GIVE EVERY NAME? PLEASE, PLEASE DON'T LET THEM DIE, I'M NOT EMOTIONALLY STABLE FOR THAT RIGHT NOW, PLEASE!

Date: 05-20-07 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Stryker
Good God...this is a truly excellent piece of fiction! I read it all in one sitting! The plot is absolutely amazing, and the characters perfectly true to form. Please continue the great work!

Date: 05-20-07 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Stryker
So glad you are back and wow what a chapter to come back with! The thought of Stryer's feet touch ground in the mansion is enough to freak anyone out. Poor Kitty, it's good that she is not letting her guilt cripple her into inaction. I wonder how they can get 'Ro and the baby back without harm. Great chapter!