

Date: 02-27-07 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Visit
Gainee, why do you insist on making me cry? That had to have been one of the most touching moments you have ever written (coming in at a close second to the end of WTL).
I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the wonderful work, Gainee!

Date: 02-27-07 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Visit
Whoa, Charles is back! Good to know he's still around... somehow. And obviously able to contact his family - that's a good feeling.
And Logan finally found those creepy cameras! Well, one of them, but I'm sure they'll be looking for the rest as well. Creepy little things. Always gave me shudders.
Gawd, I hope Logan can do something for Ro before Stryker can lay is dirty hands on her and the baby.
Awesome chapter and developments here, makes me even more impatient to wait for the next one :)

Date: 02-15-07 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
I thought Trish was a goner when you mentioned that Hank was going to be heartbroken. I can handle them being on a temporary split. It is temporary, right?
Two women don't find Hank rigidly impossible to live with. One left for the "greater good" and because of his man law, (that was hiliarious by the way), the other left because Hank couldn't deal with his transformation and he pushed her away.
“You do not frighten me, Mister Secretary,” she tossed off easily. Once he was gone, Ororo exhaled slowly, grabbing the bedrail and stumbling to sit. She covered her swollen tummy with both hands, taking several deep breaths. Oh, how she had lied. That man terrified her.
And this is way I love Ororo. She might be terrified, but you'll never know it. Shoulders back, stiff upper lip, and game face on.
Logan and his scent free shirts was a brillant little nugget of information. I love the little details you add to your characters.

Date: 02-14-07 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
Oh come on...please update again. This is getting really good and I need more RoLo action. Pretty please....see I'm begging, lol.

Date: 02-14-07 - 06:04 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
ooooh...i really love it! i'm reading the whole story over and over again!!!
pure talent gainee

Date: 02-13-07 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
# 1. I LOVE THE PIC
# 2. YOU BETTER BRING BACK TRISH
# 3. I CAN'T STAND TRASK
# 4. PLEASE DON'T KILL THE BABY.
Is it almost guttin time because to see Logan like that is killin me. He's suffering so much. Why do you make me feel during your stories? WHY? Now I'm so sad and depressed. (sigh)
Rolletti

Date: 02-13-07 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
oh my gosh! it always gets so tense when babies are involved

Date: 02-13-07 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
Gah. First 'Ro gets thrown into prison, then Trish leaves. Ugh.
I have nothing against Trish leaving, actually. She can kick serious butt.
*hates Trask*

Date: 02-12-07 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
I remember you teasingly hinting last week about Hank's thing with Trish being endangered...you soulless, cruel woman, you. (*love you, Gainee!*) This is so damned good. "The good stuff." Logan is at his best in this chapter, and you reminded me why I love the way you write him. The thing with the underwear and the laundry soap is perfect, and oh so domestic. I laughed about that, since that is how my husband sorts his tee shirts.
The closing line from Logan to Hank reminded me of James Spader in Pretty in Pink: "Why don't you take a shower, Blaine, you look like shit." Gads, I'm old...
Well, you might as well kill me with whatever plot twist you're brewing, I'm still twitching and writhing over here, going into withdrawals!

Date: 02-12-07 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
oh my!!!! i love love storm hahaha...trask is an asshole!!!
so sad about hank and trish though
i miss this gainee, but you make our wait worth!!!!

Date: 02-12-07 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
that was rather brave of Ororo. Love her reaction when he left. you better fix hank and trish!

Date: 02-12-07 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
Le sigh. I love this story.
Man Law. Snort!

Date: 02-12-07 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Choosing Sides
YAY!!
**dances like an idiot**
Wonderful, btw. Simply wonderful!

Date: 02-12-07 - 12:54 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Seized
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!! IT ROCKS!

Date: 02-05-07 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter One: Escape
NOOOO! oh gosh! what will happen to storm now? and another preggy?
can't wait, can't wait.