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Reviewer: vila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 08:08 am Title: Togetherness

this is great I love your stories especially those in ultimate verse pleae update soon

Reviewer: rory Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 09:04 pm Title: Togetherness

you HAVEto add more!!!!! I REALLY want to know what happens it's so good!!!!!

Reviewer: Darlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-04-07 - 03:36 pm Title: Togetherness

Ever so sweet!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-03-07 - 05:51 am Title: Togetherness

Where did you get the art from? I haven't read the story yet, printed it off to read later but really like the picture. I'll leave a decent review later this weekend.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-07 - 07:20 pm Title: Togetherness

HAHAHAHA... okay, you know i loved it but i had to laugh at the dialogue during sex. You know i'm a virgin, so does it really get THAT corny??? LMAO!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-28-07 - 12:16 am Title: Togetherness

Oh, yay. And the fireworks come.

That's tone and one-fourths chapters of downtime. I'm predicting another half-chapter of relaxation, then somethng happens. *laugh*

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 09:27 pm Title: Togetherness

The solitary word "Swollen" brought this whole scene into sharp, delicious focus. One more reason why I love you...beautifully written smut that manages to be full of deeper meaning. I'm picturing him in awe of her as he gets a good, close look at her new body out in the open, and liking his reaction. I know you're going to make all of us want to jump into the computer screen and kick Weapon X's ass in the next chapter, and naturally I can't wait, but this was great. Write on, Hobbins.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 05:52 pm Title: Togetherness

"Over and over again."... Damn, Ro's one lucky woman :D
This chapter was great. Ro insecure and full of doubts. Logan instantly accepting her and the baby as his family, without hesitation. Lots and lots of RoLo goodness *mmmmhhhh*
Weapon X better think twice before going after them again. But I'm afraid they won't. Think, I mean ;) After so much goodness, the evil stuff is just around the corner, right?

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 04:21 pm Title: Togetherness

Hmmmm. That was GREAT!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 02:47 pm Title: Togetherness

Okay this story is just awsome! Just like all of your other stories, but you know i'm really loving this one at the moment. More than the others! So uh...update soon!

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 02:29 pm Title: Togetherness

WOW! WOW! WOW!
The raw emotion in this chapter is breathtaking. Ro being scared for her and the baby and Logan wanting to protect his newfound family. Awesome! I can imagine what Weapon X will come against if they try and fuck with Ro and Logan! Can't wait for the next chapter and more Ro/Lo relationship growth.
Write on windrider1, write on!

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 01:41 pm Title: Togetherness

The most underutilized line in fic to date: “Give it to me.”

Holy hell woman. This had it all. Sweet, tender moments of pure RoLo goodness. Baby lovin' Hot, HOT sex. Holy God.

“Oh, God.”

His grin was wicked. “You’ll be sayin’ that a lot.”

Can I borrow Logan for...a couple of days? I'll return him almost good as new. *bats eyelashes* Excellent chapter. I can't wait to see what'll happen next.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 12:30 pm Title: Togetherness

I love 'Ro as the uncertain mama. It's cute. It's good that Logan realizes that he had some damage control to do because of the way the had said goodbye. And whoa whatta man! Steamy hot scene in the bedroom. Good chapter. :)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 08:18 am Title: Reunited

Where do I start? Okay, I like the poem/song (?) at the beginning of chapters, sets a mood, isn't intrusive, like that a lot in fact. I like this story a lot too. The descriptions of her pregnancy were sweet and well done - they say write what you know and it worked here marvelously. I like Ultimate because you can do so much more with them than you can with the older Uncanny characters with histories so convoluted it reads like fan fiction so I will definitely keep tabs on this story. It's addictive - I want more.

That being said I did think Ororo heading up to Montana where she'd stick out like a sore thumb, having lived out west myself and travelled the West, was a little odd. But it certainly made her easier to find. All in all another fantastically plotted and well written story from you. A true pleasure to read.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 03:46 am Title: Prologue: Nothing Good about Goodbye

You write so well, hooking us immediately and reeling us in leaving us dangling on your line waiting for rescue. Now this is indeed what a prolouge should be like!

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