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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-10-16 - 09:11 am Title: chapter 1: realization

writing more stories?

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-07 - 08:05 pm Title: chapter 1: realization

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-07 - 02:37 am Title: chapter 1: realization

aww, this is a good start. way cute. please update!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-04-07 - 08:28 am Title: chapter 1: realization

You have the start of a good story here. It would be great to find out how they ended up in the cabin (a little more detailed back story). However you should look into getting a beta to read over and correct your grammer and spelling. Having a beta reader is very important (I always have at least one and sometimes 2 betas for my Buffy fandom fics and still manage to miss a few things!) There are quite a few errors here and they really detract from the general readability of your fic. Getting those errors corrected would enable your readers to derive much more enjoyment from your writing and prevent them from giving up on your fic. Good luck.

Author's Response: thanks for the tip ^__^

Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-04-07 - 04:01 am Title: chapter 1: realization

Wow....really intrigued....can't wait to see where this story is going...what's up with the wounds? Keep the updates rolling out of that factory which is your mind.

Author's Response: the wounds i tossed in ta get ya thinking... i'll explain it in the next chapter ^__^

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