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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-23-07 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Leviathan

Mmmmmmmh, RoLo *sighs happily*
Poor Ro, though. No wonder she didn't want to believe Bishop was actually her son. She was told to never be able to have children. She learned to accept and live with that fact.
Loved the way Ali integrated Peter into the play, making him feel like any other kid, like part of the group. And their kiss, mhhhh. "If I want you, I’ll get you." :D Too bad he lost control of his strength while they kissed. Poor Petey. He actually believes he's going to die no matter what :(
Why's he still on shift all alone? Damn, someone should be with him 24/7. And now the Brotherhood just started their attack, gah! I hope the fact that Ali is still alive in this timeline makes a great change to the outcome of it...

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-23-07 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

The bombshells are a fallin' and the fight hasn't even started yet. WOW!!! I am so loving this; keep it coming.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-23-07 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

Kaboom, baby. Way to drop a bomb.

But I guess it makes sense. Now you leave me to wonder what the hell is going on. Probably means I'll get my attention called in class more often. Not that I mind. *grin*

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

what???*eyes pop out*
Oh mY!!!! how is that possible??? oh my! guineewop u never failed keeping us on our toes!!!!!
patience, patience, i need patience *breathe deeply*

Reviewer: noir libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

So I'm pondering this while at work and I'm wondering did she already know she couldn't have children? That would explain her denial and utter disbelief. Also why she went to Hank and had him run the test... Damnit Gainee, now I'm thinking about this like a mystery. We need to know!

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

WHAT!!! (ripping hair out of head) But...but...but how can she NOT have children. I don't understand. Hold my hand and look me in the eye and tell me everything is going to be alright. Hold me, hold me! (sniff, sniff)

Another confusing note: Why, in the first chapter, did he call Forge father when he was leaving for the past? Was that a typo because it's been bothering me throughout the whole story.

Okay, back to crying. WHY, WHAT'S GOING ON? He has Logans eyes, and he's part of them both, you said so right here, "He was a perfect blend of Storm and Wolverine, if you looked hard enough. The kid might as well have been wearing a neon sign." Hey Wolverine's senses don't lie.

Please let there be another post soon. Pretty please .

Rolletti

Author's Response: Bishop never called Forge "Father". IN that first scene there were three men: Bishop, the "elder mutant" and the man referred to as Father. The elder mutant is the one that enters the chamber with Bishop. Logan was waiting for them inside. Sorry about the confusion, darling!

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

Oh no!!!! What is going on!!! Is Bishop adopted?? He doesn't seem like it. There must be some mistake. Can't wait to see how the chain of events change.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

You're an evil, evil woman!!! I don't know how many more cliffhangers I can survive, ah!
There must be something completely wrong with Henry's test. Either that or she's lying on purpose, but Logan would smell it, so that can't be it. Dang, I need to know! Like, NOW!
Well, at least she now believes he's her son, their son. When Bishop told Logan about baseball I had tears in my eyes, so touching.
Poor Petey :( They'd probably let him know that his death would have major consequences. He feels so totally unimportant and alone.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 01:43 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

Is there some reason for your utter stupidity?”

He paused, shrugging one shoulder. “My mother dropped me once.”

best line i have heard in a long time. keep up the good work

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

Woah! What? Can't have children? She's got two!!! Something in Henry's tests is wrong. That how can she be that that cruel? Telling Bishop that? And she can have children - Bishop saw her pregnant with Shard. Okay more soon! A whole lot more! Soon!

Reviewer: noir libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

I knew everything was rolling along too smoothly. You wouldnt want to update later today would you?

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Mother

Yeeea, Dazzie's in the HOOOUUSE. Yeeeaaa, the truth is out and everyone is dealing with it. Yeeeeaaa the X-men have another X-men. Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaa Peter!!! Extra Yeeeeaaa with any ship involving Peter. Yeeeaaa Rolo family. Noooo they don't know about Shard yet.

Huh??? Roro can't have kids?

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-21-07 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled

Love, love, LOVE this story!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-21-07 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled

Whooo, Ali! So cool, good to have her on the side of the good ones :) She's always so much fun, action and trouble LOL No wonder Kitty liked her immediately.
"Logan appeared in all his Stetson and cigar glory", mmmmhhhh *drools* Damn, he could stand in the corner doing nothing at all and would still be sexy as hell! :D
OMG, "he looks at you and sees his mother", that was great. Usually it's Logan being the stubborn and denying one. It's refreshing to have it the other way around here.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-21-07 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled

Okay. You've won my everlasting devotion - again - with these two lines:

“Right, if I start seeing leprechauns and fairies, I’m so outta here.”

“Nah, we put those in the shed before we left, with the flying ponies and trolls.”

That was fabulous. That and the line about "Boys are stinky, throw rocks at them" My friend at work used to have a sticker on her desk that said that from Hot Topic. Logan reminding Ororo that Bishop sees her as his mother was beautiful. Rock on, Gainee.

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