[Report This]Date: 06-21-07 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Very well done gainee. just the right ending.
i feel so sad for ali and colossus
"“He loved,” Storm added. “I think he wanted to thank you for that gift.”
but i'm happy they are all safe!
the kids are so cute
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
that was such a great story... the ending made me cry. The image of Logan with a baby on his hip was such an "aww" moment. So cute.
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
It's sad, but a good kind of sad and well worth the wait. Thanks for sharing it!
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 07:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
heeheehee... cute sappy ending. i needed that too (as if you did it just for me, lol.)
Awww, Ali died. I love ali-kins!
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
So now i am just crying my eyes out. Because...I can't believe you've killed Ali! Ali of all people! I guess it kinda fit. But the ending...that's what...it's perfect...and sad...and awesome. I can't imagine how it is to know you've saved the world but you cannot enjoy it...that you have to just disappear. Awesome story!
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
“Thank us?” Shard interrupted. “He lived, but…”
“He loved,” Storm added. “I think he wanted to thank you for that gift.”
This was a bittersweet ride and one I can say I am soooooo thankful for inspiring--in whatever lame ass way I did. This was beautiful and detailed and so chock full o fthe good stuff taht as sad as I am to see Dazz go, it fit in the big picture. **claps** You done good, girl. You done real good!
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
OMG!! Wonderful addition to an already fantastic story. Waiting on the edge of my seat for more!
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
DAMN. you can't leave things there like that!!! FIC/Fix IT!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
oh my! pls don't let anything happen to them. can they change the future without losing anyone? pls pls
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
....evil. You are so evil for stopping like that!!!
What happened to Storm? Where'd Rogue get the new powers? Is Storm okay? UPDATE!!!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read what happens to Storm and the baby so keep on writing and update soon.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
Metal plated armor sound absolutely ridiculous going to battle against magneto. I mean Ororo would know better. Really. Otherwise...it was a good chapter. But the exposition was a bit long. They love each other a lot and they know they might not all come back. We got it. Loved the ROLO moment at the beginning. Very fitting. I love Ali. She just had to kick Pyro's ass! :D I hope you write more soon! Just one more chapter doesn't seem enough though.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
There are so many cookies in here, I love it. This is better than the movie.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
Whoa. Um..... Whoa.
Excellent. I have no idea where you're going with this next, and I like it! :D Bravo!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-07 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
WOW! That'll shut yer lyin' mouth, Rogue!!! Logan told her to stick it in her pipe and smoke it! That was awesome. Everyone reaching for barf bags was priceless, and Ali kicking Pyro's butt was perfect and just what I needed today.
If Logan just took himself out, and he's unconscious on the ground, that doesn't bode well... I'm good and anxious now. You didn't mention what was in store for him next chapter, just Ororo and Erik. I'm on pins and needles to see what happens next.
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