

Date: 01-19-07 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter Seven: Fate
OMG, they know! *yay*
Loved the moment it all set in on Logan, how he got overwhelmed by emotions, the need to protect. Family, something he probably was sure of never having for himself. What's he going to do now? Take care of his future son or go after Ro? He probably should give her some time to vent though, heh.
OMG, I'm so loving this!

Date: 01-19-07 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter Seven: Fate
“I think the term ‘Fuck me’ left your lips ‘fore mine.”
OMG--priceless.
Forgive me while I hunt down my socks--you have rocked them right off my feet--again.

Date: 01-19-07 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter Six: Want
Well, well, Magsy, say goodnight. Even metal bends before the elements. *laugh*
I. Love. You. Dang, you're amazing.

Date: 01-18-07 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Six: Want
ohhh so magneto wants a war with ro huh! i'm also curious who will know first about bishop, ro or lo?
luv it, luv it, luv it! :)

Date: 01-18-07 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Six: Want
MY EYES ARE BLEEDING!!!!!!!!!!!! Somebody call 911 because Gaineewop did it AGAIN!
Rolletti

Date: 01-18-07 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter Six: Want
... wow. WOW!
At first I kept fanning myself. Then I feared for Bish's life until he spoke, phew. Calling Ro "mother" was so sweet, but neither her nor Logan made the connection. I wonder who's gonna figure it out first, Ro or Logan.
Loved it when Logan stumbled at a certain mental image, heh. He has it bad, while Ro's still fighting against it. Not too much longer, I hope.
Great chapter! *loves*

Date: 01-18-07 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter Six: Want
Oh boy! It is ON now!! Ororo and Logan will wipe the floor with the Brotherhood now.

Date: 01-18-07 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter Six: Want
OMG **grabs pail of ice**
You KNOW I love this and you. you are evil and wicked and OMG Marry me? **bats lashes**

Date: 01-17-07 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
If you continue to write this good you might just take Holly's best writer title. I am absolutely IN LOVE with this story. It would help if Bishop didn't keep barging in on them though. I mean if he wants to live he has to let them you know...I absolutely loved the first scene with Ororo & Logan waking up in the same bed. It's absolutely wonderful! More soon! Please!

Date: 01-17-07 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
"Logan, perimeter check."
"you got it."
"Did he just... not argue with me?"
Oh, priceless. I absolutely adore you.
Must be tough on Bishop, though. I get where he's coming from, but Ororo and Logan are just always in denial. But then, that's why we love them. *laugh*

Date: 01-17-07 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
I think this is turning out great. I remember the cartoon version of the story and i like this much better. thanks

Date: 01-17-07 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
ohhhh...you did it again!!! i can't wait...for another page!!!WOW!i kinda find it funny when bishop complained about the pool table...LOL!!!! ***you rock!***

Date: 01-17-07 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Can you hear me screaming you EVIL, EVIL KITTY! Urgh!
I love the way Bishop just stepped into 'Mommy"s room'. (because we all know THEY DON'T KNOCK) I'm glad Logan didn't let her get away from him and I'm glad she said, " Too late." (happy dance)
Poor Bishy saw them AGAIN! If you're not careful he's going to end up with some deep psycological promblems. I bet if they knew he was their son, they'd learn to lock the doors.
You did an OUTSTANDING job AGAIN! Give yourself a pat on the back while I present your Pulizer.
Rolletti

Date: 01-16-07 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
i'm soooo hooked!!!! funny how bishop found them in the pool table...i really love the tension and love between rolo...upd8 upd8 ;)

Date: 01-16-07 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Love the fact that Bish walked into 'Ro's room without knocking. That sense of familarity almost got him an eyeful of something he didn't want to see. That is going to be one pissed off weather goddess when she finds out what he went to go do.