

Date: 01-16-07 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Wolverine and Storm, those are two hot tamales huh? Poor Bishop is being traumatized! *snickers* Storm is going to kick his butt when she finds out he went after Pyro. I also wonder what happened to the folks that the Brotherhood sent to check out Bishop.

Date: 01-16-07 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
I am so hooked on this story!!!!
Can't wait till next Update!

Date: 01-16-07 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Evil kitty laughter, indeed!

Date: 01-16-07 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Bish's got some horrible timing! Gah!!! I'm glad he didn't interrupt them the second time :D
Must be difficult though to see ones parents like this, thinking everything (maybe even his very existence) started off with a wild romp. To outsiders it really looks like it, but the feelings they have for each other have been there for quite some time. They just didn't show them, didn't want to deal with them, so noone knew. I hope Bish'll find out about that soon, to make him feel a bit better, heh.

Date: 01-16-07 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Frist I like to say that is a juicy picture.
Love the story, especially the teasing that Logan does with Ororo then she gets him back in the end kinda with his paycheck. Keep up the good work.

Date: 01-16-07 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Brilliant chapter. It shows Ororo in many different sides.
Bishop does take after his parents. Calm and stubborn. *laugh* I'm enjoying all their interactions.

Date: 01-16-07 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
awesomeness!!!!! Please update as much as those muses visit you! :)

Date: 01-15-07 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
WOOOWWWW!!!!! WOW! WOW!
i can't take it sooo good....can't wait for the next update...i mean...WOW!!!

Date: 01-15-07 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Every part of this chapter held my attention. Just wonderful...

Date: 01-15-07 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Wow that was quite the emotional battle with Bishop. I can understand her confusion and feeling lost after such a showdown. It was good of Logan to go the caregiver route. Good chapter!

Date: 01-15-07 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Lil Lucas was beyond cute. That whole scene was just like a fairytale. Omg, the way you write about being preggnat and babies makes me almost entertain the idea of having one myself. Then the idea of having something that big come out the size of a a salt shaker just shakes me back.
But your imagery is spectacular. :prints story out for Fanfiction Folder of Fame:

Date: 01-15-07 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
OMG, the ending! One of the sweetest scenes ever *melts*
I'm so in love with this story! :)

Date: 01-15-07 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I've come to the end. You are so...AMAZINGLY TALENTED! I can't write because I'm constantly reading your stuff, and if I'm writing, I'm constantly looking to see if you posted. I need help, I'm a fic addict or fic whore. Wait, I think I'm both.
Rolletti (waiting for chapter five impatiently even though you just posted four ) :)

Date: 01-15-07 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
you are amazing, with every story and every piece, i love the way you tell stories.

Date: 01-15-07 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
I Love this story! It's so cute the beginning relationship between Ororo and Logan !
Update very soon!