

Date: 01-15-07 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Wow! Wow! And wow again! Awsome story! I LOVED LOVED LOVED the ending! I can not wait for more! Soon! Very soon!

Date: 01-15-07 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
I hate you. You put everyone else to shame. **tosses aside own writing** I'm an addict. Seriously. :P

Date: 01-15-07 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
CAn I say what an amazing read this is! The use of dialogue is wonderful-I can really picture the scene in front of me as I read these last 3 chapters. Especially this one-I couldn't help but smile widely . You've written this so tightly, keeping the secrets with you closely making us speculate and speculate using every word to try to get an idea/predict what will happen. Love love love it. Esp Bishop/Hank conversation. Keep it up!

Date: 01-15-07 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Oh, loves! This is fun!
I love the Bishop-Logan connection. Plus all the RoLo you've been throwing in here and there lately. They do fight very nicely. Hank is big, blue and fuzzy. What's not to like?
Amazing stuff, as usual. Intrigue coupled with amusement. Logan buying Marie tickets to Germany + Ororo busting his ass = icing on the cake.

Date: 01-15-07 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
OMG!!!! this is sooo great...update ipdate....sorry i'm just too excited..ur d best men!!!;)

Date: 01-14-07 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Oh...I really like this! I suspected that Bishop was Ororo's son, but I didn't expect that he was also Logan's. I thought his father was Forge. I love the way Logan is irritating Ororo without even knowing why. How long will it take for him and Ororo to figure out that all the fighting is intense attraction.
Please keep it coming!

Date: 01-14-07 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Ohhh...Logan's busted. It's cute that they find each other undeniably hot but too annoying for words. Hopefully Bishop won't end up witnessing his conception! LOL. It's good that he has Hank to help him out with his displacement in time.

Date: 01-14-07 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Omygosh. Still lovin on Bish. Love Hank, duh.
But the biggest amount of love goes out to the antagonistic Rolo. I almost kinda don't want that to change.
Almost. :D

Date: 01-14-07 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
I love the take on the fighting couple to be. And Hanks reaction to Logan being the father cracked me up and Bishop's confussion over thier hatred for each other. Priceless babe, priceless.
Rolletti (waiting in anticipation like always)

Date: 01-14-07 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
i loved this update. i thibnk the concept of the story is great, but this particular chapter is just so right, so well written, lone of my favs! thanks

Date: 01-14-07 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
LOL LOL, I love it when they fight like this :D It's too funny. They love hating each other ;) Can't wait to see how things'll go from here. I mean, they're gonna end up together... someday... somehow. :)
Poor Hank. He knows about them being Bish's parents and is forced to keep it all to himself. Loved his reaction when Bishop told him about Logan being his father :D

Date: 01-14-07 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
The last bit between Logan and Ororo was just spot on perfection. Honest. you rock socks, baby doll!

Date: 01-13-07 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Two: Enemies
Reading this fic makes me appreciate the "One Man's Worth" episode even more. I'd forgotten how great it was. I'm loving the interactions b/t 'Ro/Logan/Bishop. Can't wait for more! :)

Date: 01-13-07 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter Two: Enemies
So now we know that there is a link between Storm (yeah we find out the hard way watching her tumble from the sky). Now we just have to figure out what the heck happened in the future and what role the brotherhood will have in it now. Hmm....I wonder if his knowledge is modified every time he phases.....

Date: 01-13-07 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter Two: Enemies
Wow! You've got me hooked. I want to know more and more, especially why Storm is so important to Bishop that her injury would cause him to flux in time. Could she be his mother?