[Report This]Date: 06-13-07 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat
Well written, I could almost see the shifts to the different settings. All the emotion and the drama is making me anxious for the climatic battle! Good job.
[Report This]Date: 06-12-07 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat
my favorite part?
Lucas and Shard. Brilliant. There are no other words. It was...Brilliant.
Even as the others woke and their mother barked over the intercom for her future children to join the X-Men, they held on.
Just a little longer. OMG **tear**
I love you, man.
[Report This]Date: 06-12-07 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat
*gaps for air* You almost drowned us in gooey mushness. But this chapter is a beautiful one. Really really beautiful. Simple. Fitting.
[Report This]Date: 06-12-07 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat
Beautiful. Bravo!
[Report This]Date: 06-12-07 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat
Well done, Genie. This certainly can be called the calm before the storm. it was... filled with tension, but at the same time a lot of love going on. emotional.
[Report This]Date: 06-12-07 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter One: Sacrifice
Dang. Ooey-gooey goodness aplenty. I love all the respective goodbye lovin' in this for each couple. I just enjoy seeing those relationships, and how protective each one of them is about their mate. Betsy has some neat layers in this story, definitely different from your interpretation of her in Walk the Line or Fade. Like John was thinking, she really did have a silly, fanciful side that worked well, in spite of how dark her role was as Magneto's disciple. Having to comb through diseased minds? Creepy.
I can't wait for the next two chapters. Or for anything else that you give us, Gainee.
[Report This]Date: 06-12-07 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat
I loved this chapter.... especially this last scene with Bishop and Shard. I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 06-12-07 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat
ohhhhh...this is it!!! gainee i'm so excited ....what will happen, what will happen???? ohhhh i can't wait.
shard and liz are soo sweet pls let them get through.
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Loyalty
Shard is a bad assed solider and one heck of a daughter. Good girl. I wonder if following a Bets and John plan is really a good idea. I hope it works out. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Loyalty
Awww how sweet, a father daughter talk. Thanks for allowing us a peak into their future relationship. I loved how they found Pyro in the foyer. LOL
Rolletti
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Loyalty
Okay, Rogue's no longer a weenie, she's just evil. I can live with that.
Once again, you've made me like John and Betsy, even though in comic verse I like her with Warren. You're right, this was a great chapter. It ties together the rest of the story very well. The bond between Logan and his daughter makes me smile.
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Loyalty
I'm so glad ur updating ur stories, i know it hasnt been that long but i really crave the updates lol
This story gets better and better, am waiting for the big action with anticipation
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Loyalty
Great Heart to Heart
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Loyalty
LOVED the talk between Logan and Shard.
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Loyalty
If they don't use this exact script as an X4, the move won't be worth seeing. Because it's just that seriously awesome. And very perfect! I love this story. It's one of the best stories i have ever read. I didn't even realize how much i missed it until you started updating again. Please update soon!
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