

Date: 02-16-07 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Love is in the air! That is sweet....and hot! Poor Bishop. I wonder what is causing his BP to go up? Shard showing up? I wonder if that is good or bad. Great chapter.

Date: 02-16-07 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
WHOAH! shard too. i mean how can storm concieve?
the proposal rocks!
nice one! can't wait for the next hehehe

Date: 02-16-07 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. fucking cliffhanger! WTF!!! i need more now!! YAAAAAAAAAY SHARD! HURRY UP!

Date: 02-16-07 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
YAY! SHARD! **woot**

Date: 02-16-07 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
VERY nice. I like. I like a lot!!!!
WHOO!!!! Shard!!!!!

Date: 02-16-07 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Ohhh, now Shard's there, too. I wonder why. Must be urgent, I guess... Can't wait to find out!
Love the fact that Ro asked him! That was great. The whole scene was great! The one in the kitchen, too LOL Logan mimicking Alison was hilarious :D

Date: 02-16-07 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Way to go Storm! Asking him yourself. Sometimes I think if she had to wait for him to ask, she'd be waiting forever.

Date: 02-16-07 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
When you update, you update with a bang, Gainee! Loved it!
Since Shard is there now, does that offset what Marie told the Brotherhood about the X-Men?

Date: 02-11-07 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
It's taking me a while but I haven't forgotten this story. Now some comments.
"His love for her had been fast and fiery, not made to last." Wonderful, wonderful reasoning here and I love it. For me it always has to be a feasible reason for him to turn to Storm in movie fics. Nicely done.
“She would never tame him, but something about her soothed his inner demons." Another wonderful explanation.
"Storm’s was the faint linger of burning ozone. It would leak into the scent she always carried, reminding him of the way her eyes would swirl from dark to milky as she tapped into her power." I always give kudos to those who can pinpoint what Ororo would smell like and anything realistically original such as this is brilliant.
Finally I had to laugh when poor Bishop was dreading the thought of them doing it on the pool table. I'm really enjoying this.

Date: 02-07-07 - 10:04 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Shattered
DANG RL SUCKS!!!
Rolletti

Date: 02-07-07 - 08:17 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Shattered
Are you letting real life get in the way of updating? IS SHE LETTING REAL LIFE GET IN THE WAY OF UPDATING??!!!
Rolletti (wimpering in the corner)
Author's Response: Yes. I am.

Date: 02-05-07 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Shattered
I never did like Marie. She's way too weak compared to Comicverse Rogue.
I hope you give us a little more info on Shard in your upcoming chapters. I'm curious as to what happened to her.
Hehe, I love the subconscious "Slow Burn" hints you have in this update. I do believe we are all in need of a fix *glares at windy*.
Can't wait for the next update. This story has become one of my all time faves!

Date: 02-04-07 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Shattered
traitorous bitch.

Date: 02-04-07 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Shattered
Awww Logan is in L O V E! I am so happy to see them comfortable with each other, all domestic and stuff. LOL They are comfortable with Bishop as thier son too, and that makes the whole story so special. I see he knocked this time before barging into the room.
“Oh look,” Bishop said with something that could have been humor. “You’re both dressed.” That made me laugh out loud.
Dude, Rogue is a traitor to her own? That is MESSED UP! I never saw that one coming. I thought she was going to have an accident and die when she left the mansion. Woah! I can't WAIT to read the update.
Rolletti (waiting always impatiently)

Date: 02-04-07 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Shattered
I've always liked Marie; never had it in me to do anything really, really bad to her or let her do anything against character. But this is a good shocker! Yeah she's pissed but who'd expect her to do this? Can I have some more please?