
Date: 04-29-12 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Simply fantastic. Words aren't enough to express how much I loved this fic. Bravo.

Date: 08-20-09 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter One: Sacrifice
Just commenting on the choice of actors. I haven't start to read the story and I'm loving Keith Hamilton Cobb(as Tyr Anasazi) as Bishop.

Date: 05-03-09 - 11:16 am Title: Chapter One: Sacrifice
Just found this story and I can't wait to read more. I love that you made Bishop Ro and Lo's kid

Date: 04-22-08 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Great story. Rolo forever! Always felt bish was storm and wolvies son.

Date: 02-27-08 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
I have to say this i hate that you made kitty happy and not rogue why do you hate her so much at least make her content being evil but you tortured her that is so not right anyway it was a great story

Date: 01-18-08 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Oh man, what can I say....
I loved this story so much. You made me care about each of the characters, even characters I usually dislike or not pay much attention to.
Beautifully written.
There were times I laughed and my sides hurt. Times I blushed and shook my head. Times my heart ached for the characters and finally there were tears at the end. Lots of tears.
My best friend and I read this story together and would call each other after each chapter talking/laughing/speculating.
I love this story. Thank you for writing it.
Well done.

Date: 07-02-07 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
That was seriously one of the best stories I have ever read. And trust me I've read a lot of stories. I loved how you wrote the battle and the ending. I felt like I was watching it all on a screen.

Date: 06-22-07 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
This might be a little mean, but I'm glad Dazzler bit the big one...I never liked her.

Date: 06-22-07 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
This might be a little mean, but I'm glad Dazzler bit the big one...I never liked her.

Date: 06-22-07 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
This might be a little mean, but I'm glad Dazzler bit the big one...I never liked her.

Date: 06-21-07 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Aww, that was bittersweet (poor Pete and Dazzler). Also sorry she had to end Erik....but he was nuts! Loved the kids. Nice way to end up. :D

Date: 06-21-07 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Awwwwwww...that was excellent! I knew I was in for tears when I saw the word "bittersweet" up in the summary. The idea of Piotr living alone and sad breaks my heart, but it fits with what we know of his character in the comics, he's gotten kinda used to losing people he loves. For a moment, I thought he was the one who was gonna die, considering how he did in the mainline comics curing the Legacy Virus.
This was great. It took a lot of work making that many relationships in this story believable and full of warmth. Great character development and devotion to how each of them should sound and feel.
Now, where was the fluff piece you promised us? (wink)

Date: 06-21-07 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Noooooo! Why did it have to end!

Date: 06-21-07 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Noooooo! Why did it have to end!

Date: 06-21-07 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Collapse
Wow. That was simply... wow.
Thank you for this wonderful story Gaineewop.