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Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 09:50 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

OMG, break my heart.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 11:13 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

Whao. "I would have said no." never sounded so powerful before.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 08:00 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

Oh, poor Roro. :( How heartbreaking and terrible for her. Poor Hank too :(

Very emotional, very intriguing. This is a great story.

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 12:38 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

JUST RIP OUT MY HEART WHY DONTCHA!

URGH!!!!!!!!!! ok, ok, where is chapter three?

Rolletti (looking for more Kleenex)

Reviewer: Cassandra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 12:14 pm Title: 2. I would've said no.

I like the story. But I have to say that I am disappointed in Logan. He claims to be Scott's friend but that doesn't stop him from sleeping with Jean. When does Scott find out the truth about Jean and Logan and does Ororo find out as well? Those are reactions I would like to see.

Author's Response: I cut Logan some slack. He's been telling himself that he was in love with this woman for two years. In his mind, when she throws herself at him in the garage, it is simply her coming to the same conclusion and they are going to be together. Except...well you'll see. Also Ro and Scott will find out in a very unexpected way. And it ain't pretty.

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 11:16 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT! WHAT! WHAT!

OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rolletti (twitching)

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 09:01 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

Boy oh boy, this is an interesting story. Now Logan is about to see what Ororo is REALLY feeling...and not just about Hank.

Please Update soon. I like it.

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 08:50 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

WOW. i mean... WOW. sheesh... if this is your first story... i wonder what ur next one is gonna be like! cant wait for more.
keep up the great work yeah?

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 07:45 am Title: 2. I would've said no.

This is your first story????
it's sooo good, cant wait for another update!
i like the way the situation and story line was set in the first chapter, how things were/are between jean, scott logan, ororo and hank etc, it's sets the scene well and now we're able to follow the development of the story.
it's so sad about the ring, but i love the way Ororo is honest to logan about wether she accept or not, it's so sad!
dont leave me waiting too long for an update

Author's Response: Yup my first foray into fan fiction. Thanks for the feedback. I love feedback!

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 07:10 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

OMG!!, what an cliffhanger. This is an *wonderful* start,
update soon. ;)

Reviewer: Rising Goddess1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 01:31 am Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Oh my gosh, poor poor ororo.
Jean's a slut!
update update!! ASAP

Author's Response: Yeah. Jean's a Ho. But I'm trying not to make her an evil ho.

Reviewer: pop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 10:22 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

love d story so far. can't wait 2 see more rolo!

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 10:17 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

WHOO!!! You go girl!!! (or boy) This was pretty good for a first story! It seemed a bit crushed together for one chapter, but I still enjoyed it. What a twist! :) Draw out the story a BIT more in future chapters, but I'm already hooked on this story. :D Good luck!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm all girl. Thanks for the feedback. I do have a pathological need to explain stuff. You should've seen my first couple of drafts. Yikes!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 10:08 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

Oh, you're good. You've got me hooked already. I was already on for the ride when you said "pussy whipped without the pussy." That was great. Darn Logan...I hope Ororo settles his hash.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 09:21 pm Title: 1. The Wolf Stands Alone

OH NO YOU DIDNT END IT THERE! Damn, this is good. I am hooked. I loved the no powers aspect, but in a school. It's so tangible and real. Very nice.

BOO ON JEAN.
BOO ON LOGAN FOR BOIKIN JEAN! Why doesn't he know how Ro feels?! Sike, I can't wait for the moment of realization comes in.

Poor Scott.
Extremely poor Hank.

MORE MORE MORE!

Author's Response: Logan just got hit in the face with reality when Jean basically said he was nothing but her magic stick. He's closer to realization than he knows.

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