Jeeeesus Christ this is one of the best suspense/serial/drama stories I've read in a long long while. It's got me on the edge and your stalker is creepy as hell even if he hasn't shown up in a couple of chapters and this whole thing has been an insane rollercoaster of emotion and believe me when I say that this has been what I personally believe as the best fic that dealt with the Scott/Jean/Logan/Ororo love polygon, hands down. Even if, you know, Jean and Logan aren't telling anyone. Still, best best best. And the RoLo in this is amaaazing and I am seriously so upset you haven't updated in forever, this fic is fantastic. I really wish you would update :( !!

I'm on the edge wondering what's going to happen next.

Crimony! That is really scary! But of course we know that Covert is a loony perv. Now I wonder where he is....

Author's Response: As we've seen in the 'Ro and Lo Show' Covert watches from the shadows. He's closer than they know.

Great chapter!!!! It starting to get really good. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE really really Really SOON.


Author's Response: Yeah, things are picking right up. The momentum increases in the forthcoming chapters. I've laid all the groundwork, now the payoff.

I read the firs chapter of this fic and was totally hooked. So I printed out the rest and read it on the train. My goodness this is excellent! I like the combination of suspense and romance. I love Ro and Lo's relationship. Unlike a lot of Rolo's here (smile) I also like Jean. I was afraid she was just going to be superbitch Jean but I think you are doing some interesting things with her.

I also like the pace of the story. You are a very, very good writer. I am astonished that this is your first story, it is so polished and really keeps the reader hooked and wanting more.

I am dying for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I am glad that you like Jean, maybe you can keep my feet to the fire with her so that I can't let her devolve into evil Jean.

Whew! I'm glad that Jean and Logan worked that out. I thought she had lost her mind for a while in there what with her bringing up that he was seeing someone. It is curious that Forge came back to Xavier's. I wonder what is on his mind. Hmm....Good chapter.

Author's Response: Like Emma said, nobody turns down Xavier! In my universe there is a sorta mythos about Xavier. I haven't done any background exposition but I am trying to convey the idea that Xavier has influence with very powerful people. He is a respected and feared. He can literally pick up a phone and ruin your life. As for Forge, he came back because he actually regrets leaving the way he did. So far we've only seen how Ro has dealt with his abandonment but Forge also needs closure. This is the way that both of them will get it. I also think people will be a bit surprised that Forge believes he is the injured party in the break up.

Forge is back, Jean's jealous, and we still don't know who the mystery man is. I smell trouble on the horizon.

This is really good.