

Date: 08-31-07 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Come Closer
I love this, Gainee! Ro secretly in love with Scott, wow. Logan and Ro avoiding each other wherever possible, but needing each other all the same, both sharing the same kind of pain... I love when they argue btw :D
Logan bringing home a girl hushing her to not wake the kids was hilarious! I was like "Oh no, he didn't!" LOL
Ro and Forge are hot! Simply hot! But it's still good to know they don't love each other, heh ;)
Kitty and Warren, so cute! Not to forget Hank and Trish! I love them.
What an intense moment when Logan got buried under the rubble, bringing all of Ro's fears to the surface, her refusal to lose him as well... very moving. I wonder if this little incident changed their view about each other. He must have seen her tears...
I can't wait to read more, I'm totally hooked! But what else is new :D

Date: 08-22-07 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Come Closer
you are simply amazing as usual!

Date: 08-07-07 - 02:30 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake
I always love how you can make the transition from one couple to another. You had me hanging onto my seat before with Ororo and Logan arguing and 'Ro's heartfelt talks with Forge, but now I'm rooting just as loudly for Warren and Kitty. What they have feels genuine and easily possible in the "real world" and I was tickled at her comparing their intimacy to a Nora Roberts novel.
That moment with Ororo desperate to get Logan out from the rubble almost made me cry. Damn, that was good. Having her get socked in the gut by reliving the worst day of her life with someone she won't admit to loving was powerful and moving. Consider me moved. It's funny, during the recovery at the sight of the explosion, everyone sought out who they loved. That was excellent.

Date: 08-07-07 - 02:18 pm Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake
this story is brilliant! you use such good writing and make everything flow right together! keep it coming! :)

Date: 08-07-07 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter Seven: Come Closer
I wonder if almost losing Logan will change how 'Ro deals with him. Thanks for the update. :)

Date: 08-06-07 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Come Closer
Oh my. Splendid. YES!!!! Please do update asap!

Date: 08-06-07 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Come Closer
welcome back!
great chapter as always

Date: 08-06-07 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Come Closer
woww i love this story..alot!

Date: 07-06-07 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter Six: The Sun Goes Down
This might be one of u'r best stories.

Date: 06-30-07 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter Six: The Sun Goes Down
AAAAHHHHH! what tha fuck happened?!?!?! did someone whack her across the back of the head?

Date: 06-29-07 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Six: The Sun Goes Down
ooops...
how will ro and logan find each other?
i'm really curious
can't wait
=)

Date: 06-29-07 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Six: The Sun Goes Down
Wow Wolverine and 'Ro are so damaged emotionally I wonder how they will get past it. Cute "Pretty Woman" moment for Kitty. I wonder what happened at the Fundraiser was it a bomb, a grenade.... Interesting chapter. :)

Date: 06-29-07 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Six: The Sun Goes Down
Did you find that picture before you wrote the last chapter? It like, totally fits!
Warren's mother sounds like a real pip. More of her. Can't wait to see her and Kitty get into a verbal catfight.
I like Ororo's taste in music, since I listen to quite a bit of the same myself, especially the Red Hot Chili Peppers, Journey, Aerosmith and Nickelback. Ya know, you could write a RoLo story with pretty much ANY Nickelback song playing in the background! They just fit.

Date: 06-22-07 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Five: Ángeles y Diablos
ACK!!! Perfection! Love it love it! Brightened up my day!
Go get em Ro! Hate the man you're destined to be with.... right? lol! I love the Scott twist!!! If I weren't Ro/Lo, I would so be Ro/Sco. :D Please let Logan pursue Ro! Eee! I can't wait! Excellent writing, as usual.

Date: 06-22-07 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter Five: Ángeles y Diablos
No ritual animal slaughter? Oh, shucky darn!
Armani and Galliano. Yup. Now I'm a happy fiend. Ororo and Logan's confrontation was so well-executed, since he hit the nail on the head once again.
“I don’t hate him.” Ororo defended.
“No,” he agreed, opening the door. “You just hate her.”
That made that entire scene so polished and heartbreaking. Again, I love these two when they argue, because you can see the two of them straining toward each other in small but meaningful increments. Kinda like watching the school bully and the playground princess trade insults instead of admitting they like each other. Forge is sexy. I want him to cook my breakfast, too.
Kitty and her partners in crime getting ready. That brings back memories of younger, skinnier days where I had somewhere to actually dress up for.
Keep it coming, woman.