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Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-07 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

Whoa nelly! what an exchange with Ro and Wolvie. Seems like she is going to get her groove back. Man...what is the deal with the danger room? Wow!

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

hahaha, yeah the date was interrupted by DR session. but i enjoyed it. LOL logan will get it! can't wait gaineee :)

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

gah! why would you not continue telling us about forge and ororo's date?! we need to know

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

Whoa! Awesome chapter! The Ro/Lo convo in her office was a bit awkward or my tastes, but it still got the job done. Can't wait for he Ro/Fo date! lol! Will Logan see? Confront? Tease? Can't wait!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

screw the danger room session. let's get to that date. ummm...hey, genie. where's my other 3 or 4 updates??

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-07 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Three: Conflict

MWUHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA.... **ahem** ok. Now for the review...

You write like most people breathe. It's amazing. You are a phenom to behold. I'm all about the Kitty/Warren. Mmmm. More please??? *bats lashes**

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Two: Going Under

wow, that was... nice weaving of words! It was fluid. i like fluid.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter Two: Going Under

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter Two: Going Under

oh my gainee...i love the update!!!
oh i can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-07 - 12:09 am Title: Prologue: Alkali Lake

You know me, I love my angst. Kitty and Warren makes me warm and fuzzy. Never in the comics, but it's perfect for movie verse, since I love movie Warren. It's nice to see Kitty, usually the pursuer, or usually the one everyone neglects, having two guys who kinda like her for a change.

The scene in the kitchen was great. That would have given me a migraine, too. Even though I love my RoLo lovin' as much as the next person, I'm enjoying watching them argue. Keep it coming. This was well worded, well paced, and very engaging, Gainee.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-07 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Two: Going Under

aww... poor 'Ro. And how dare that girl just walk around like she lives there. I hope 'Ro tears him a new one for bringing some chick into the mansion.

I loved the scene with Kitty that turned in to the Kitty/Warren. Very, very cute.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-07 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Two: Going Under

Look up heartwrenching and poignant in the dictionary and I'm sure it says "See Gaineewop's fanfiction". You are a brilliant writer and a masterful storyteller, able to capture the most intricate of emotions with a simple combination of words on a scree. **claps loudly**

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-07 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter One: Heartache

That's not just heartache. they are falling to pieces, poor mansion and people inside it.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-26-07 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Wow...totally intense. Really, just amazing and wow. Hey, I'm a Kitty/Warren supporter here. I'm tire of Peter/Kitty fics, so I'm all abut Kitty with anyone else fics. Actually I'd just like to see you address Warren's personalit and maybe hav her loosen him up.

Rogue was tolerable, I hate her, but I stomach her for you. :D Wolverine deserves a beating with a heavily splintered stick for bringing a woman over and fucking her on top of it. Oh dear me...

Anyway I'm all about Ro/Scott, and I would love to see how that would work. Shit, I'd love to see Ro have sex with Wolverine and say Scotts name, or even during a kiss. He wasn't the only one who was in love with someone in that god awful disturbing pairing. Ro just had the better half. :D

Great job, can't wait for the next chappie. I hope it's soo, since Iknow you're a fast and prolific writer.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-26-07 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter One: Heartache

Wow! This is interesting. Ororo is being human....and Wolverine is being even more...Wolverine. I like how it is developing. It is a different take that Ororo loved Scott....which is not unthinkable as they were so close....

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