You must login () to review.
Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-07 - 08:53 pm Title: Make New Friends

Yay update! I love this story!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-09-07 - 02:57 pm Title: Going For Broke

Ali tickled me, and I love Scott's reactions to her, particularly him being tongue-tied. I can't wait to watch Ororo and Logan playing "soccer mom/soccer dad" and see what other silly things happen to them in their suburban setting. Might have to go back and read this through again, which I certainly don't mind!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-09-07 - 12:05 pm Title: Make New Friends

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-09-07 - 01:53 am Title: Make New Friends

the thing about round robins is that writers get to interpret things as they will. I liked this chapter, but i do wish it was done early on. Ya know, a bit of history. This was an easy read. Very likable.

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-08-07 - 09:43 pm Title: Make New Friends

lol please tell me 'Ro isn't doing a booty call. I'm sorry but I had to say it! Loved the last scene with Scott and Ali and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-11-07 - 06:10 pm Title: Because I Said So

Well it certainly looks like they are building a great friendship. Now if only their kids got along a bit better. :)

Author's Response: I like the idea of them having a friendship, even if it is a grudging one at first. The kids will have fun driving a wedge between their parents, and Jean will probably approve!

Reviewer: serafimo's pretense Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-10-07 - 08:10 pm Title: Final Frame

Great fic! I really enjoy the voice you gave Ororo.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-07 - 01:46 pm Title: Because I Said So

I see Logan's financial insecurities getting in the way of him and 'Ro in the future. He needs to realize there's nothing wrong with the woman earning more money than the man. Sweet interaction b/t Scott/Ororo, too. They make me smile.

I also like Ororo's address. : )

*eagerly awaits Reiko's update*

Author's Response: Reiko came up with Scott and Ororo's common tie, so she gets the compliments for it! Logan and Ororo will have a few different obstacles, not least of which is his shaky financial situation!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-07 - 10:47 am Title: Final Frame

I laughed out loud at the image of Ororo doing a roundhouse kick in bowling shoes. I like the connection b/t Ororo and Scott; and the fact that Jean doesn't know. Loved the Star Wars references, too. It's true that Leia would've been a better Jedi than Luke. He whined too damn much.

I'm curious about why 'Ro and Lucas were staying at the hotel. Was T'Challa effing up? I really enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-08-07 - 07:52 pm Title: Because I Said So

aww... so cute! I love the playdate/almost real date and again I loved her outfit, but I feel bad for her feet. Why'd she wear those to Chuck E' Cheese anyway? Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: 'Ro's a shoe addict...we'll put her in Skechers next time!

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-08-07 - 11:41 am Title: Final Frame

Nice Update.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-08-07 - 01:01 am Title: Final Frame

Ah that was cute at the end. And can I shoot Jean in the foot...please?

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-07 - 04:06 pm Title: Final Frame

lol I love Laura. She so cute. I feel bad for Scott. I wonder what Jean will (would?) say when she finds out about Scott and Ororo... hmm. Not like she could... should be mad about him keeping secrets. And what did she do with Logan's phone? Did she send another text?

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-07 - 02:09 pm Title: Final Frame

You know I've been, like, stalking the Realm, waiting for this update, right???

Was Leia in the trash compactor in that movie? I thought it was only Luke and Han. Now I have to go back and watch it. Oh, well!!

I see you took my suggestions on what they would order for food! That's so killer. That and Ororo secretly being a beer girl.

My mind will be pondering updates! This was awesome.

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-26-07 - 03:49 am Title: Spare Me…

This is so funny, I love the interaction bt Ro an Lo. Please continue writing more.

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it! Reiko is up next to write a bit more. I can't wait, either!

You must login () to review.