[Report This]Date: 04-18-07 - 04:34 pm Title: Seven and Ten Split: Part Two
Of course I love this. I will add on toit today or tomorrow, or just send you my draft first. I sent changes to punctuation before I even read this here, I replied to your email, so thanks for that! Lucas is believable. And it is nice to see the bond Ororo has with her preteen son. Reminds me a bit of my son Max.
[Report This]Date: 04-06-07 - 09:18 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
Trouble in the paradise of the Summers home hunh? It is so cute that Nate has a crush on Ororo. :)
[Report This]Date: 04-06-07 - 02:15 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
There's nothing quite like your boss walking into your office to make you get off the internet...
Anyway, Nate asking Ororo out for dates is hilarious! I can seriously picture that. Looks like little Rachel is following in her mothers footsteps; manipulating men to get what she wants. I feel for Scott.
This was really good, Reiko.
[Report This]Date: 04-06-07 - 02:01 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
I can't believe I didn't see this updated! How come Scott can't ever cheat on Jean? It would serve her right. She's always getting nooky on the side, while he's at home either being cluelessly stupid, or silently fuming.
Even though I am anxious to read the next part, take your time honey. We understand.
Author's Response: Scott has his priorities straight and that includes putting himself last. Jean selfishness is actually taking away from herself. She's gonna learn that sooner or later.
Thank you for your thoughts, Mum and me appreciate them. She loved this site to pieces. She wished it was around back in the day.
[Report This]Date: 04-06-07 - 12:55 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
lol seems like Rachel has taken after her mother in more ways than one. So cute how Nate has a crush on Ororo! I feel a bit bad for Scott though...
Can't wait for the rest, but life comes first. I wish you and your family the very best.
Author's Response: It's weird seeing Rachel's name, because my name is Rachel. But, yea, Rachel and Nathan take after their Mother and Father, respectively, in ways. Scott has some insecurity issues that have never been addressed. Hopefully they will be soon...
[Report This]Date: 04-06-07 - 09:46 am Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I sure will. Stick around!
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 11:33 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
Poor Scott. Always the chump. *so* cute that Nate asks 'Ro out every time he sees her.
Author's Response: Lol, Scott just needs the right incentive to whip out his obnoxiously large balls. And he will. Lol, Nate takes after his Dad...in a way.
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 11:28 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up
“When I Grow Up, I Want to Be Barbie – That Bitch Has Everything.”
That is so funny and true!
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 11:15 pm Title: Going For Broke
Me like
Author's Response: :D Glad to see you do! More to come.
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 03:22 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
Made me giggle all the way through. It's nice to see a fic where Scott isn't totally clueless. You captured an afternoon at the Summers' home very well. I can't wait to read the rest.
And I've told you before, but you have my deepest condolences. It'll get better with time. :-)
Author's Response: Glad to make you laugh. This isn't a story with a direct linear plot. It's liquidy and free forming. In other words, its being made up as we go along. The Summers' are one of those nuclear families that is about to explode. :D
Thank you for you condolences. I appreciate them. Writing comedy helps, alot.
[Report This]Date: 04-05-07 - 12:53 pm Title: Seven and Ten Spilt : Part One
It's fun seeing this uploaded! I had forgotten about that line with Ororo sticking his privates in a socket...
All right. Take your time writing up that other piece that you mentioned, kid. Can't wait! Talk soon.
Author's Response: I'm responding to reviews really late, but I am reading them, promise. I had that "privates in a socket" line in my head for a while and finally found a neat place to put it. Got some other ideas will drop you a line soon, k.
[Report This]Date: 03-27-07 - 01:01 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up
Both chapter one and two are great. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Reiko let me give her current chapter a quick beta read two days ago, and it is a lot of fun. It will be put up soon, as her time allows, and as we come up with other things we want to do with the story. Suggestions are welcome, by the way! Thanks, Dragon.
[Report This]Date: 03-24-07 - 04:19 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up
Cute interlude with Logan and his daughter. I thought I would fall on the floor laughing when his daughter mentioned disliking Jean. Good chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Burnz. Reiko will bring on the comedy as this goes along, since this is her baby, but some of the sappy parent moments might jump from my pen once in a while! Little girls are sometimes more blunt when their single dads date a woman they don't like. If Logan is smart, he might listen!
[Report This]Date: 03-22-07 - 09:21 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up
This is so cute! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Reiko gets to decide what happens next! It's her turn. Glad you are enjoying this. Suggestions are welcome, Tiger.
[Report This]Date: 03-22-07 - 08:18 pm Title: I Wanna Be Barbie When I Grow Up
Logan getting his daughter ready was too cute. I love father/daughter moments. I'm looking forward to the bowling lessons.
Author's Response: Reiko gets to write those lessons! Logan getting his kid ready isn't too different from any other parent. I have to jump through hoops with mine!
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