
Date: 04-16-15 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 5
This is a interesting and different story. I hope you continue it. I look forward to reading more.

Date: 04-11-07 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 1
i love the idea and can't wait to read more

Date: 04-08-07 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 2
I continue to be intrigued. I'm assuming T'Challa's more a father figure here?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! yes T'Challa is Ororo's adoptive father in this fic, I thought it more apropriate ;)

Date: 04-08-07 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Fascinating concept. I didn't enjoy Civil War but I'm intrigued by your take on what might have been.

Date: 04-08-07 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 4
It's a little backwards to read the last chapter first and then review the last chapter first but this little bit piqued my curiousity so I'm going to check out the beginning. I'm quite fascinated!

Date: 04-07-07 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
very interesting. this is a diffreent mix to x-men. i like it. hadn't seen a fic like this.

Date: 04-07-07 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Interesting chapter....now I'd like to now where Ro landed herself. I can't wait for the next chapter...please write it up soon!

Date: 04-05-07 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Not familiar with the Civil War storyline at all. But I like your descriptions. I like the story and enjoy this beginning. Your descriptions of a post-apocolyptic NYC was chilling seeing how I'm a native - clutch the pearls. Look forward to following this one!
Author's Response: I love AU's and post apocalypse stories, so I had to make a dive for it. hope you will like it and I'll do my best with the updates! =)

Date: 04-05-07 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I skipped Civil War and just read the summaries of it on X-Axis and UncannyXmen.net instead, but this was good. Nice that you wove in the different tie-ins of that story and gave us an overview of what could have happened if everyone was registered; reminds me of Days of Future Past.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) having a lot of different plots for this fic, and hope I can execute them well! :)

Date: 04-05-07 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Intersting beginning....I've never read the Civil War stories but I'm familar with the basic story-line. I rather like how you have all of the different back plots and under plots as was revealed in this chapter. Great start and I can't wait for chapter three!
Author's Response: I have't red civil war thouroughly, but I like it, and this story has been on my mind for a long time and it feels good to have started writing it. Hope you will continue to like it :)