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Reviewer: redbird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-08 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Six: I Can Hear Heaven

Love, love, LOVE this story! I'm in awe of your Logan and Ro. And this paragraph --
He could sense the love of his pack, the fierce protectiveness. Unable to control the baser instinct, Logan backed down. His claws stopped biting at the inner flesh of his hands, lulled into a dormant state by the sudden appearance of the true Alpha Male of this pack.

-- is it wrong that that made me love Logan even more?

Reviewer: EbonyGriot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-08 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Six: I Can Hear Heaven

Wow you completely sold me on the arc from the film script. The build of inner tensions between Ororo and Logan gripped me more as each chapter progressed. I would have liked to have a sense of some of Scotts feelings to put his reaction into context. Please write more soon!

Reviewer: EbonyGriot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-08 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter Six: I Can Hear Heaven

Wow you completely sold me on the arc from the film script. The build of inner tensions between Ororo and Logan gripped me more as each chapter progressed. I would have liked to have a sense of some of Scotts feelings to put his reaction into context. Please write more soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-08 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Six: I Can Hear Heaven

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-08 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Six: I Can Hear Heaven

Wow!! I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.

Reviewer: NikNak Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-26-08 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter Two: Xavier's School

I love this story. I think this is like my second time reading this!!!

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Date: 12-19-07 - 05:52 am Title: Chapter Five: Papercut

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-20-07 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter Five: Papercut

Ooooooo she in trouuuuuuble. Big brother Scott it too mad if there is a tic. Good thing it didn't go any futher before he walked in, because it would be interesting to see if Logan can grow a whole butt back that's been taken off with Scotts lasers. LOL Great chapter. Are you almost finished with the next?

Rolletti (waiting impatiently as always)

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-07 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter Five: Papercut

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-07 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter Five: Papercut

I love this! Who needs the movie when you can have this story! Seriously! It's so much better :)
All these little extra scenes and of course the better versions of old ones, it's perfect!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-15-07 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Five: Papercut

lol poor Scott.

anyway, I love how you extend the scenes and actually make them make way more sense than they did in the move. And how you explain what's going on with everyone who wasn't in the main scenes.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-15-07 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter Five: Papercut

I love your take on how X1 should have been. Great details, and great retooling of "the speech" where Ororo tells him off. I always wished Halle had more lines in that scene.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-15-07 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter Five: Papercut

well, well, well, some interesting developments here. I like how Scott busted them. ;)

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-10-07 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter Four: Complications

This is how the movie should've went instead of Logan sniffing after Jean like a bitch in heat.

Keep it coming

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-06-07 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter One: Wolverine

Beautiful, beautiful description of Ororo discovering and embracing her powers! I'm not a fan of the movies so seldom read movie fics but the beginning of this story really captured me. Now, can you tell me what Radi na Weupe means?

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