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Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-06-07 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter Three: Cyclone

ugh she's such a bitch! Can Jean just trip down a flight of stairs and die already?

I actually love that 'Ro's being a naughty little homewrecker in this. Good for her :) But now I'm going to have Girlfiriend suck in my head lol

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-05-07 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Three: Cyclone

Isn't Ororo a little trouble maker. Uh-huh. The UST is making me sweat! I wonder what Jean is cooking up back at the Mansion.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-05-07 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Three: Cyclone

Daaaaaaannnnng!

"You're gonna be trouble."
"You have no idea."

Man, that was good. I almost pity Jean, because I know a) she'll make it worse for herself than it has to be, b) she'll have more opportunities to make a fool out of herself, c) you can tell she's about to go back on that manipulation/jealousy/whiny downward spiral of hers, and d) she's got so many people running scared and has no real friends. Man, poor Jean... ;-)

Go, ninja, go ninja, GO! Go, Gainee!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-01-07 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

Hee hee, I'm enjoying this a lot. It's so fun to read. More please! :D
"Mr. Tall, Dark, and Can I have a spanking" Oh yes, sooo right!
Yay for Ali and Betsy, what an announcement :D Thanks Jean for ruining it, ugh. Gads! *rolls eyes* I just hope Logan'll come to his senses and get the hell away from her. Ugh.
Awww, poor Scott. I really like him here. I hope he'll find the one to complete him. I'm just not sure if I want it to be Jean... because, ugh!!! ;D

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-29-07 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

The pain between Scott and Ororo was so heartbreaking, I found myself almost wishing for them to have a second chance. That is until I realized her true destiny was watching over her. And I can't wait for Jean to get hers.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-29-07 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

Hmm...the story took quite the unexpected turn with Ali and Bets. I wonder what Logan thinks of the sad tale of Scott and 'Ro?

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-07 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

Grate chapter!!!! Storm should have beat the SHIIT out of that BITCH Jean. I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-07 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

...'Ro could always send a lightning bolt to set Jean's bed on fire and bring a storm to stop the fire before it hurt anyone else.

Just saying ;)

Reviewer: Caitlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-07 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

Words can't desribe how I felt when I saw you update this piece.

It was delicious though.
Please don't abandon it.

Reviewer: kanf1292 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-07 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

The last scene was so sad i feel for scott and poor ororo

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-07 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

Poor Ororo and Scott. That final scene was heartbreaking. And Logan's ass is always lurking somewhere in the shadows. lol Loving the angst. Can't wait to read more!

P.S. - Please have someone beat Jean's judgmental ass. Thanks!

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-28-07 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter Two: Love Sucks

That was a great chapter! I hate Jean, lots.

Reviewer: friyourass Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-30-07 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.

not to big a fan of slash but it's probably because im an ali/kurt shipper. oh well. i still loved it. I love thats storms all chick in this. She's like "All mine and no you can't drive it"

Reviewer: Kendall15 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-07 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.

i LUV THE FIRST CHAP, AND DON'T WORRY NO OUT OF CHARACTER COMPLAINTS. THIS IS WICKED, AND ONE MORE THING, HOW'D YA CHANGE THE HAIRCOLOR, I'M TRYING TO DO THAT ON MY SOFTWARE BUT NOTHIN'S WORKING.

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-07 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.

I had a grin on the my face as always. You have combined three of my favoritefemale characters, Alison, Betsy and Ororo.
And i just love it.
I love how in the first chapter you touch on different elements. More to come i hope.

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