

Date: 06-28-07 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
tease. i wish i wasn't sick and half asleep. you deserve a better review.
but, you're a tease. (that means i likes it)

Date: 06-28-07 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
“Wow. Aren’t you Mr. Tall, Dark, and Can I have a spanking?”
love that line lol I'm using that in an away message, with a link back to you.

Date: 06-28-07 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
Yes! A blue eyed Storm (which I always love) who is a wild girl. Yes! It is definitely love at first read. :) Fun!

Date: 06-28-07 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
I dig it :)

Date: 06-28-07 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
Snog. LOL. Bloody brill, lovie. Bloody brill. And I have to do the happy dance of giddyiness that Betsy and Ali made it as a couple. Somehow I knoew that would work! :D More of this fun stuff soon I hope/

Date: 06-28-07 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
Love IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON..................

Date: 06-28-07 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
I always love your stories...this one is no exception.
No complaints about the characters, I like what you've done with them. Bets and Ali, great couple. I still don't like Jean but Scott and 'Ro, great!

Date: 06-28-07 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter One: Punk. Rocker. Mutant. Babe.
man, that was priceless.
"Bite your tongue!"
"Scottie-Bear!"
"Mr. Tall, Dark, and I Need a Spanking."
Man. I wish I could think up a really good, silly scene like that with so much great dialogue and inner monologue at the same time. Betsy and Ali? Great slashy pairing. Never would have slash-paired Ali with anyone, but with this interpretation of Betsy, she fits. Love the pic, too, by the way.