[Report This]Date: 06-13-08 - 06:32 pm Title: In the eyes of the serpent
you are such a tease! What's going on? What sides? What'll happen? Why is Ororo so important??
I loved the scene with Jubes and the stranger at the end after he kicked Bobby's ass.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Ok ill tell ya...........................eventually lol more comin soon T :)
[Report This]Date: 03-02-08 - 04:12 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark
Clint Barton is in this fic. I’m not sure whether to squeal with delight, as he’s such a favorite of mine or groan in despair as he seems to like to cut himself and lick his own blood which isn’t a good sign that he’s on the right side I’m thinking. I like your cast though, like the little used characters so seldom seen in a RoLo. I love your descriptions too. And Ororo and Nate now that’s an old pairing no one does much with and of course went no where in Marveldom. I’m curious about Scott and Nate, father and son – they are related as such here aren’t they? And if so how old is Scott, old coot old?
Author's Response: yea sorry Darlin ole Clint aint a good guy in this, honestly though he is not a "good guy" in the mainstream either really he has the whole anti hero thing there too i always though but he is a great charecter i hope ya liked this one got more comin soon and scott and Nate are not father and son in this one just more of a best buddy at work type thing
[Report This]Date: 02-29-08 - 08:12 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark
Well huh? Didn't see her fallin' into bed with Nate. Hmm... Trouble is surely coming as is our lil' motorcycle guy. I wonder what will happen when the whole gang meets up. Good work. :)
[Report This]Date: 02-29-08 - 07:56 pm Title: The First Move
Whaaaat! Stetson wearin' -cigar smokin' stranger comes up to you when your on a double date and asks you to dance...you have 5 seconds hot shot . What do you do? What do you do?!
Oh that was too much. I can't wait to see what happens!
Also the scene with Warren...before was a, um, a...GROSS (Ew...pee and poo). I guess he is all goodness and light so that the thingies run away. Interesting scene and dialog.
Author's Response: lol glad ya like B :) got more coming soon and ill try to tone down the parts with things reliveing themselves lol
[Report This]Date: 02-22-08 - 07:18 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark
As i mentioned before, i enjoy this genre. I'm enjoying the detail that you put each chapter. The is slowly coming together and you add interesting spins to it by adding characters that we are familar with. Thank You for updating, and please continue with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you much R and yes i will be contiuing this story soon
[Report This]Date: 02-20-08 - 11:01 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark
BRAVO!!!! As always, the imagery is beyond amazing to me.
Author's Response: lool thank ya much Ang :)
[Report This]Date: 02-20-08 - 04:28 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark
loved this chapter! It was a little hard to tell between the song lyrics and the story, but still, that made a very sweet (and interesting scene). I still can't wait to find out what's going on with the two sides and this job Logan has to do!
[Report This]Date: 02-20-08 - 04:19 pm Title: Eyes in the Dark
This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. Please post the next chapter ASAP :)
Author's Response: Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you very much A :) will have a new one soon
[Report This]Date: 02-19-08 - 10:03 am Title: Eyes in the Dark
Hey, Chet! Glad you got the chapter up, but there was one piece of revision that made it in by accident:
The stranger held its gaze and never flinched until he reached up and gripped it around the throat. The thing struggled under the iron grip and thrashed about, trying to break free. (note: don’t need grip twice. I like the visual)
Sorry about that! Talk to you soon. THis was still great!
Author's Response: lol dang i missed that one lol prblem solved though sorry about that :)
[Report This]Date: 01-31-08 - 06:30 pm Title: The First Move
I'm having the hardest time getting my second review to show up, I could just scream! But that aside I'm really enjoying this. It's so mysterious. I love the quotes you have as well they really set the mood for your story. I really, really loved the moment Ororo became aware of Logan and oh how I love your Logan. He's so mysteriously hard core sexy! Love his terse style, it's so Logan, so perfect. Well done!
Author's Response: thanks a ton darlin i hope the coming chaps really hook ya cuase in a few its all going down hill
[Report This]Date: 01-31-08 - 05:47 pm Title: Gathering Darkness
I am so intrigued by this!
Author's Response: :) Always glad to know that i have peaked your interest with a story
[Report This]Date: 01-30-08 - 05:52 pm Title: The First Move
OMG!!! How dare you leave me waiting for more. LOL!! He asked her to dance with a "confused" Nate beside her. Now that's a sexy, bold man. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: lol forgive me the next chappy coming soon
[Report This]Date: 01-30-08 - 09:48 am Title: The First Move
You know I'm enjoying this! "What kind?"
"Wet."
That cracks me up each time I reread it. And yes, I reread your fics. Write on, Chet. Write on.
Author's Response: Hey i have reread several of your stories, several times lol
[Report This]Date: 01-30-08 - 05:51 am Title: The First Move
I'm so confused, but it's okay! I really want to know what's going on, so update soon!!
YAY he asked her to dance!
Author's Response: Thanks tiger and i shall update soon and dont worry the answers will be coming soon :)
[Report This]Date: 01-30-08 - 01:29 am Title: The First Move
Very cool story, don't stop writing now. Update soon. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much and i shall soon :)
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