[Report This]Date: 10-01-07 - 07:34 am Title: When You Feel So Tired, But You Can’t Sleep
I'm glad Logan remembered where he knew her from. I hope Ororo remembers soon. Luke is going to get his isn't he? Either from the police, Bullseye or Fisk right?
I'm not worried about Ororo (or Logan) but I am a little worried that things will get worse before they get better.
Author's Response: Yup. Sure will get worse, but it will also get interesting. Fisk and Bullseye will drag Luke into it pretty deep. Luke doesn't plan ahead.
[Report This]Date: 09-16-07 - 02:57 am Title: Careful
Reading your stories are like some voyeuristic adventure, Cee! As always very well written, so detailed orientated you make me never want to write again because no one does it better. I’m anxious for them to get together and have a feeling that 911 call will be the catalyst. Very interesting turn of events.
Author's Response: hey, you better keep writing, you! You know I love your stories and your style of writing, since you have great insight into your characters, and you keep readers interested without being overemphatic or exaggerating things (something I tend to do with abandon!). I want them to get together, too. We shall see!
[Report This]Date: 09-10-07 - 04:44 pm Title: Careful
wow... what happened?? Who did it???
Author's Response: The guy standing at the newsstand when Logan and Remy made the arrest is kinda suspicious...
[Report This]Date: 09-06-07 - 02:17 pm Title: Careful
Gads, yer killin' me! First the (almost) traffic accident, which was shocking enough. But then she got home only to find everything trashed. What a day. Poor Ro. Poor Logan, too! Almost ran over a girl about Gayle's age. A crappy way to start the day.
What's with the missing photo of her and Katie? Someone after the kid? Luke probably? And what about the guy at the newsstand... Ohhhh, so many questions.
Here's hoping for a certain officer to show up at Ro's apartment... ;)
Author's Response: The missing picture will be significant as the story moves along, not so much for the purpose of someone coming after Katie...yet. Logan will indeed visit the crime scene. We'll see what he finds.
[Report This]Date: 09-05-07 - 04:35 pm Title: Careful
Man alive, I am sure that little girl took 10yrs off Logan's life! Robbed? Dang that's rough. The personal information is the worst part. The picture missing thing is just plain creepy. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks, Burnz. Kids do that to a person! I've got gray hair from each of my kids doing stuff that bad.
[Report This]Date: 09-05-07 - 12:56 pm Title: Careful
I hate those stupid balls! Everytime I see a child playing with on in front of their house I just want to pop it. Children do stupid things when they lose the damn things.
So happy that it was Logan that was driving. I was holding my breath during that entire thing.
Great job, Cee!
Author's Response: wheeeeee! Thanks so much, and you can take a breath! Yeah, kids do some foolish stuff in the street. My kids are big enough to know better, and I still have to jerk them back from running across parking lots from stores. I hate that.
[Report This]Date: 09-05-07 - 11:37 am Title: Careful
Gripping.! Can't wait for the update.!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09-05-07 - 02:31 am Title: Careful
Great job with the traffic scene. Everything from describing Katie's red coat to the spilled coffee in Logan's car was great.
The guy at the newsstand... it's Luke right? Sneakin' around. Did he ransack Ororo's apartment too? Let me at 'im. *grins*
Thanks for the update, I've been watchin' this story.. Watchin' the other one too. --- W6C
Author's Response: And I'm watching yours! Thanks for the feedback, you know I always enjoy it. Luke's up to something. Something bad.
[Report This]Date: 09-05-07 - 12:27 am Title: Careful
Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait to write some more of it, either! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 09-05-07 - 12:26 am Title: Careful
oh. i almost forgot! why does Ororo have pictures of Gayle? and why were they taken? okay...i'm done asking questions. lol
Author's Response: I fixed that. It should have been Katie's pictures, not Gayle's.
[Report This]Date: 09-05-07 - 12:23 am Title: Careful
i'm really enjoying this story. i like the fleeting interactions between ororo and logan.
oh. what's the deal with the guy at the news stand? is he significant? okay okay...i can wait it out. lol
Author's Response: Yes, the guy at the newsstand is significant. More soon. Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: 09-04-07 - 06:19 pm Title: Careful
What is her ex husband into???? i know it's his fault.
Author's Response: *chuckle* I know it's his fault, too! More to come soon.
[Report This]Date: 09-04-07 - 05:58 pm Title: Careful
Please continue, enjoying you story very much. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, Sango! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will continue when I get my ideas in order.
[Report This]Date: 09-04-07 - 05:10 pm Title: Careful
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for the warm welcome back, kiddo. I'm glad you liked it, and I appreciate the feedback and visit.
[Report This]Date: 09-03-07 - 01:28 pm Title: Broken
Ooohhh, I had a feeling when Jean and Logan felt this chill... I knew something bad was going to happen. Poor guy. He just lost everything. Losing your whole family, that's one of the most horrible things I can think of. *shakes thoughts away*
I so feel for him. Make him feel better soon, Cee! *makes puppy dog eyes*
Can't wait until Ro and Logan meet again. This time under much better circumstances I hope :)
Author's Response: I can't resist puppy dog eyes, just ask my kids and my husband. I want him to feel better, too. I like him too much. Their circumstances will improve eventually...it might take a while. But they will continue to meet.
Terms of Service | Rules | Contact Us |
Skin created by Kali