

Date: 08-05-07 - 09:02 am Title: Overcast Days
Each scene in this is full of vivid imagery and realistic dialog and emotions. The end scene was chaotic and traumatic and I can only imagine how poignant you'll make the aftermath. I'll be looking for more of this fic. **claps and whistles**
Author's Response: Poignant? You expect POIGNANCY from me, Hobbins? Me, the creator of angst, cheesy sound effects, fart jokes and clothing malfunctions? Okey dokey!!! (giggle) Thanks as always for the feedback. I hope you like the updates, whenever I get up off my keister to write more.

Date: 08-05-07 - 02:17 am Title: Overcast Days
OMG!!! That was so realistic. My heart stopped.
Author's Response: I'm glad it seemed genuine to you. I didn't want to beat the details to death, since it was a death scene of a protagonist in this story and of a child. Thanks for reading, 'Queen.

Date: 07-25-07 - 06:55 am Title: Groceries
Oy, what are you trying to do, gross us out with the whole Wolverine/Jean thing? Seriously! Well you've definitely got me intrigued, and i can't wait for the next chappy!
Author's Response: Well, you know if Logan and Jean are together in the first chapter, and this is a RoLo piece, something's about to happen to shake things up. I hope you keep reading!

Date: 07-24-07 - 09:51 pm Title: Groceries
An intriguing beginning!
Author's Response: Thanks! This one isn't going to be too kid-centric, I promise. And not too horribly high on schmaltz, either, for the moment.

Date: 07-24-07 - 03:52 pm Title: Groceries
Normally I dislike non-powered fics, but you always seem to draw me in regardless, and this is no exception. I am eager to read more. Of everything by you. :D
Author's Response: I like writing non-powered fics, but many folks share that opinion with you that powered ones are more fun to read, so I can appreciate that! I'm glad this one caught your attention for the time being, Hobbins.

Date: 07-24-07 - 02:11 am Title: Groceries
OOOOO, cute begining.
Author's Response: Thanks, 'Queen.

Date: 07-23-07 - 11:07 pm Title: Groceries
First.
I LOVE that song.
Just thought that should be said : )
Second.
Intriguing as ever 'Ceenote. Keep it up.
- Roxxi
Author's Response: Thanks, Roxxi! I love that song, too. It goes through my head frequently.

Date: 07-23-07 - 08:19 pm Title: Groceries
hmm... 'Ro's not going to be a homewrecker is she?
Author's Response: No. I hate the idea of her breaking up his marriage, but people might not like the alternative...

Date: 07-23-07 - 06:47 pm Title: Groceries
I look forward to seeing how you weave these two stories together. :)
Author's Response: I'm still kinda figuring that out, but thanks for the vote of confidence!

Date: 07-23-07 - 04:53 pm Title: Groceries
Woot glad ya got this one out Cee been waitin on it lol good job let me know if ya need any more info :)
Author's Response: Oh, I definitely need more help and input. I will pepper you with questions, my friend. Glad you liked this bit of it.

Date: 07-23-07 - 03:59 pm Title: Groceries
awsome! i love the beginning where she's like "oh, honey, did you remember the olives?" CLASSIC! keep it coming! :)
Author's Response: *grin* Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.