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Date: 10-29-09 - 09:07 am Title: Logan

loved it! oh wow! it was perfect!

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Date: 11-28-08 - 05:03 pm Title: Logan

this was just perfect i loved it

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-11-08 - 12:14 am Title: Logan

I have to say that was a beautiful end to a beautiful story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with the rest of us.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-08 - 04:35 pm Title: Logan

That was such an amazing story.

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Date: 09-05-08 - 07:30 pm Title: Ororo

You know, you could leave this story with this chapter only and I'd be perfectly content. Which makes it even more cool, the fact there is more show coming...

^^ Great and *hot* chapter!

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-08 - 04:48 pm Title: Ororo

Dang! Coffee, my foot! He didn't want coffee!

Very hot. I liked her anticipation and nervousness, that made it feel real. I also like his demeanor, namely that he doesn't mind her boldness or inability to keep her hands off him. Good work!

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-08 - 05:06 pm Title: Logan

That's soo cute.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-08 - 09:55 am Title: Logan

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can�t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-08 - 07:32 am Title: Logan

Woot! First one here. Ah, I was just saying to myself I was wondering when this next chapter was coming out. It's good to see things are moving along. Logan's got Ororo on the mind and who would blame him. Can't wait to see Ororo's follow-up chapter.

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Date: 08-17-08 - 10:41 pm Title: Ororo

This is actually an interesting story. You hardly ever see 2n person stories being written probably because its hard to pull off the effect of placing the person perfectly in each situation. None the less I like the theme that this story has about single-parent families. Its hits more at home for me because I grew up in a single parent home and I can identify with some of the issues that both families have gone through. And I think you portray that beautifully in this story and I hope to see more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-16-08 - 12:40 pm Title: Ororo

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-16-08 - 12:12 pm Title: Ororo

Okay. I love this. The scene at the front door was priceless and so real. Once again, I love the second person narrative and Ororo's relationship with her daughter. Other details made this warm and familiar, like eating the rest of the blue JellO. I know you're probably busy with school, but I can't wait til you update this again.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-08 - 08:59 pm Title: Logan

Dang! Oh well, BYE JEAN HELLO 'RO!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-08 - 09:03 pm Title: Logan

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can�t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Storms_rose Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-08 - 07:27 pm Title: Ororo

susie is raven, right? I thought ravens original name something like susan darkholme...of course i could be totally making this up but it sounds on the edge of right

Author's Response: Raven Darkholme is Mystique's 'slave' name in the film and comics.

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