

Date: 01-15-18 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I would like to know how it ends.
Date: 05-08-15 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1
what happens next?

Date: 12-23-07 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm intrigued with the premise but there are a lot of mistakes here, some very confusing to me. A beta would be good to have. I admit I need one myself but seldom use one though so in all honesty I shouldn't complain much. Well, I hate to think she's going to steal her cousin's man and yet I like the way you wrote it so I'm going to have to check out your next chapter.

Date: 12-20-07 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
This was imaginative and entertaining! I love Egyptian pharaohs and queens ever since I took art history in college (like, eons ago). I can picture the scene with Tut in the throne room easily. And Ororo and Logan are a riot in present day.
Couple of small wording spots that look like typos, but I won't launch into detail here. Talk to you soon. And thanks for the thank you!

Date: 12-19-07 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!