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Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-08 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter Three

Grate chapter!!!! I look forward to your next update!!

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-08 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Two

Kill Xavier!?
Really? Chica, you've got me wanting more. I honestly should be doing my articles for newsapaper, but instead i'm in enthralled by your writing.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-08 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter Two

Da-da-da-dum! I love it! I can't believe I missed this. It is a terrific start. I look forward to finding out the back story of how Storm was separated from them (presumed dead) and watching her new some-what confused relationship with Logan develop. Yippie!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-08 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter Two

O.o

good stuff. Sorry, that's all i can manage right now.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-08 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Two

Mmmmhhhh, Logan! Totally love that guy. LOL And Ro, awwww, I just wanna hug her. :) So confused and scared. I'm glad Logan got to her in time, giving her some sense of safety and comfort.
I hope someone's gonna destroy that headstone soon before Ro sees it, getting creeped out even more.

Reviewer: angel24buffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-08 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Two

What is going on? First Ro escape that horrible place and now she doesn't remember who she is> Update fast. I can't wait to find out if she is going to carry out the plan to kill CHarles Xavier. Windrider1, your writing is superb. The inticate details that you use grab me from the first sentence. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-08 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Two

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-08 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter Two

Wooooooooooooooooooooooot!

Logan rocks my socks. What a big, rough n'tough softie he is! I also love Ororo's delirium. With her new fighting skills, I can't wait to see whose ass she kicks first.

The man’s heart was positively bleeding for the woman on the bed. I love that line. Man, that just brings it all together right there.

Author's Response: **face hurts from grinning** Thank you, Cee! Someone's ass needs a whooping... Don't know for sure who yet. But it'll happen. :)

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-08 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter Two

This chapter was so awesome. You managed to make Ororo's fear seem very real. You also captured the intensity of Logan's feelings so well. Awesome! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks!! **blushing** I'll update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-04-08 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter One

YOU, my dear, are a tease. You post not one but TWO stories which I couldn't keep myself from reading. I thought to myself, "Alex, she's a busy lady. This will probably not be updated too regularly. And that's fine, but you need to wait 'til a few chapters are posted before you start reading."

Well, obviously I couldn't wait. I read both first chapters back to back and I love them so much and now I find myself checking the Realm and LJ every half hour for an update.

You are very cruel. (But amazzzzing. Of course.)

Author's Response: I am cruel? Wow, who would have thought that could be a compliment, lol. But it is, so yay! An update is up and I'll be writing more later today--I think. **huggles**

Reviewer: gitsrus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-03-08 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter One

and you leave me hanging here? goodness, pure torture. i always a good run away from your captives fic! i can't wait to see where this is headed

Author's Response: look who's talking about leaving the readers hanging??? LOL

Reviewer: friyourass Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-03-08 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter One

wow man this is friggin awsome!! pleeeeeeease give up another chapter soon

Author's Response: Thank you! And please is such a magic word! Update is up! :)

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-08 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter One

ohhh... this has good beginnings. i do hope you continue on with the story. update soon pls.

Author's Response: thanks! Glad you are enjoying it! Update up!

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-08 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter One

I finally got time to sit down and read this. I should have known you'd rock my socks off.

This has me absolutely glued to my monitor. I keep thinking any second there will be more! Its such an interesting storyline and I've got a million questions rolling around in my head! I won't ask them, cause lets face it, you'll answer them if I wait patiently enough.

Right?

Brava, darling. This is fantastic and I eagerly await more!

Author's Response: Hee hee! Thank ya, dahlink! Eventually I'll throw in some answers...eventually... lol

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-08 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter One

Another Fic, already?
This is crazy. That is as simply as i could put it.

Author's Response: Hahaha. Crazy good? Or crazy bad?

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