Date: 08-18-12 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
All I can say is fantastic! The family dynamic here is incredible. I could almost feel the love between Ororo and Logan coming through every word. Thank you, maybe we will see a completion to this, I can hope. A A
[Report This]Date: 02-06-11 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
I think my cuteness quotient of the day just overloaded. Seriously, this was several levels of adorable, I suspect it's borderline illegal somewhere, some place.
I've read quite a few fics that deal with Logan and Ororo having a family - none quite capture the feeling like you do. Just. Everything was perfect, heaven help me. I have a silly grin on my face that just won't go away. :)
[Report This]Date: 10-10-08 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
Great story. I loved all the RoLo moments. You really captured their personalities pretty well.
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I do try to give them more screen time, but the story isn't just about them. *sigh*
[Report This]Date: 10-04-08 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1: School's Out
Sweet and fluffy. Kendall is easily presented without having to go into past detail. Instead we hit the ground running and are introduced to a character who is already established. Her interaction with her father is classic and the hard line drawing Wolverine proves he's still got with a gentle but firm statement.
Ororo is also well described and her POV gives us a better insight into Kendal's character and her own love for her child.
There were no flaws in this chapter. It is a masterpiece
Author's Response: He's a big softie. With hard edges.
Thank you for the praise! I'm glad you took the time to read and review.
[Report This]Date: 09-06-08 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
Okay, I love the dress. I also got a kick out of the mistletoe. Makes you wonder if Kendall planted it there to distract her parents while she ran off with Stephen!!!
Author's Response: There's a drabble swimming around in my head about the mistletoe tradition in the mansion - and RoLo ha ve been keeping a winning streak on finding it first for scores of years.
[Report This]Date: 09-02-08 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: Please have snow and mistletoe
I can't wait to see how Logan is going to react to his little girl having a boyfriend!!!!
Author's Response: It will be SPECTACULAR. And he already detests Stephen... Moo hoo ha.
[Report This]Date: 08-29-08 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4: Snow men
It's so weird, reading a Christmas fic in the end of summer, but I get a kick out of it. Poor Logan! I like the exchanges between their kids.
Author's Response: I know, it feels odd to write it all out, too. :) Sometimes these things just come tumbling out at the strangest of times.
And poor, poor Logan! He has no idea just what has just happened.
[Report This]Date: 08-29-08 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Kitchen Talk And The Kenyan Inquisition
I loved this:
Stupid sneaky kid with his sneaky senses of sneakiness.
That's cute. This chapter was good anyway. Can't wait to see what happened with Ro's ex...I have a feeling I know who it is! *dances*
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading my scribblings. Kendall is great fun to write and using her voice, it gives me a break from trying to match Our Heroes' speech with the dialogue from comics.
I think the well-known ex will make an appearance eventually, if not in this fic then certainly in the future. It'll be interesting to see Kendall put two and two together then.
[Report This]Date: 08-29-08 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 2: Eve's Eve
I like the contrasts between romantic and sexual in the love scene, it was a good blend. Ororo was great, not passive in the least, I like it when she's a little aggressive and when he's indulgent with her. I laughed about the sink; my own sink was broken last summer when a pipe got clogged and my husband and his dad left it in pieces. It was like that for a week. I had to do dishes in the bathtub.
Author's Response: Hee, I had something eerily like that in mind with the sink comment - may have to write a drabble about that later. In my mind Kendall has, with purely altruistic intent, turned a clogged sink into a Rube Goldberg machine. :)
Glad to hear the love scene came out all right - I like reading sex scenes with a dominant Logan as much as the next person, but it's nice to flip the coin every once in a while as a reminder that 'Ro's not exactly a simpering damsel in distress (more like a distressing damsel, if you ask poor Logan...)
[Report This]Date: 08-28-08 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 4: Snow men
Keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thank you for encouragement, something new should be up soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 08-28-08 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter 3: Kitchen Talk And The Kenyan Inquisition
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: The next chapters are well in the works and something should definitely be up soon. Shame that my muse tends to meander from one point of this AU's timeline to a completely different ones... Right now I should be concentrating on chapter five but she's pushing plotbunnies that hop around about fifteen years before the Christmas of this story. *sigh*
[Report This]Date: 08-27-08 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter 3: Kitchen Talk And The Kenyan Inquisition
Having just read the first three chapters of this story, I must say that you have done a fantastic job of it! I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 08-26-08 - 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1: School's Out
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope to have a few more chapters up this very weekend!
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