

Date: 06-07-10 - 05:14 pm Title: Mine To Make
dammit i am so pissed that the little nosey shithead got the note that logan left for ro and balled it up now she will never know how much logan loves her also is the professor off his rocker scott was out of control with rage logan had to do something to ensure ororo safety damn i am sooo happy to see this story back running please keep it coming

Date: 06-07-10 - 03:22 pm Title: Mine To Make
is there gonna be a squael????????

Date: 06-07-10 - 03:35 am Title: Mine To Make
I'm so glad you updated this! I love this story sooo much! I'm happy to see that Ororo is going after her man! ^_^
Please keep going!

Date: 10-29-09 - 03:08 pm Title: Much too Much
gorgeous update. that was the best fight between logan and scott I've read in a fic so far. knock down, drag out, and no one walked away unscathed. so glad you updated, star.

Date: 10-29-09 - 03:01 pm Title: Much too Much
gorgeous update. that was the best fight between logan and scott I've read in a fic so far. knock down, drag out, and no one walked away unscathed. so glad you updated, star.

Date: 10-28-09 - 10:58 pm Title: Much too Much
Ahhh Man! This can only get better from here! Please... If you have any shred of humanity...don't leave us hanging! Lol

Date: 10-28-09 - 09:21 am Title: Much too Much
Ro is gonna be beyond pissed that everyone made decisions for her without her consent. They made her powerless and made Logan leave. Oh yeah, I hope she reaps a mega ass whoopin on all of them.

Date: 10-28-09 - 04:21 am Title: Much too Much
Wow an awesome update that delusional cyclops has some freaking nerve dont nobody want his weak whiney ass uhh and that silly bitch jean trying to place blame on ororo and that bitch betsy and overn=bearing professor trying to run ro life is just crossing the line now when she wake she is going to beleive everything dumb jealous jean and nosey ass betsy said about logan not sticking around.. well this story is just wonderful please keep it coming!!!!

Date: 10-28-09 - 01:13 am Title: Much too Much
See I was right with you all the way, but this chapter I'm not feeling. I don't mind the throw down between Scott and Logan. Not to mention the danger it became when Ororo was caught in the middle. But the reaction of everyone in the mansion is baffling to me.
Given the events that went down, I don't know why everyone is blaming Logan for what happened. Scott clearly was out of line. Logan was acting in self-defense. And given his history and temperament, I would think no one would be surprised he tried to kill Scott, since Scott attempted to kill them both.
I mean even removing my RoLo status I can't see why Logan is taking the full brunt of this thing.

Date: 10-28-09 - 12:09 am Title: Much too Much
YAY! finally you continued!!! I like waited FOREVER for this update, and it was SO worth it!
not a fan of Xavier right now though *sigh*

Date: 09-04-09 - 02:51 pm Title: First Time For Everything
hey there. Luvin the story very much! Scott seems to be a pain in the ass in this fic, I really hope this isnt the end of rolo :) plz continue and very soon.

Date: 09-02-09 - 07:12 pm Title: First Time For Everything
I loved this. Darn that Scott.
I liked how romantic it was, but also how real it felt. that hint of awkwardness made you feel for them both. I'm glad he wasn't smug, he seemed to be in quiet awe. Definitely a good thing. Hope Logan kicks Scott's ass.

Date: 08-30-09 - 03:43 am Title: The Garden
omg thats so goood your a really good righter

Date: 08-27-09 - 05:44 pm Title: The Garden
I feel sorry for Emma. She should have slapped him again.
This was great. There was a lot to hold my interest. Ororo at this age is very authentic, her reactions strike you as genuine for what someone that young would feel about being in love with a man, that's one of the things I like best about this fic.

Date: 08-24-09 - 11:17 am Title: We have a SITUATION
I didn't want to critique your work, but I was just wondering if you were in the process of putting up more chapters. I really like this story and am interested in knowing how it'll end. I implore you to keep writing for I need something entertaining to do while I'm at work:)
Author's Response: Hi rachel:
Thanks for sending me this message. I AM going to update soon. I actually just got back from vacation, and prior to that I was busy with producing and directing a play. Now that, that is DONE I'm excited to get back to this story. Thanks for following. I hope to have something out before the end of the week.