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Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-09 - 06:30 pm Title: Moving to quick

Kinda would've helped if he'd actually grabbed the new nightie BEFORE yanking the other one off over her head first...I'm just sayin'...

I'm being silly. Poor guy underestimated the power of a naked Ororo, didn't he? I like how he took care of her.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-09 - 01:46 pm Title: Moving to quick

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Reviewer: mika Uriah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-09 - 01:31 pm Title: Moving to quick

According to the comics she lost her virginity to T'Challa when she was a girl in Africa, however, I like your take on their first time together and her being a virgin it kinda shows how desperate for love she actually was (not to any fault of her own) - there is something rather sweet about Logan bathing her afterward.

Reviewer: MIka Uriah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-09 - 01:24 pm Title: Friendship

it bothered me that they never dealt with the aftermath of her 'engagement' with Arkon, I"m glad some one had finally approached the subject, sounds interesting - keep it up.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-09 - 11:28 am Title: Moving to quick

Logan can be so caring and loving with the right person, and 'Ro's the right woman for the job.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-09 - 02:52 am Title: Moving to quick

Hot and sweet, very goog story. Love the very tender side of Logan after his and Storm lovemaking. Hope more chapter(s) come soon. ;)

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