[Report This]Date: 01-17-11 - 05:59 pm Title: Not Ticklish
haha poor Wolvie, i'm glad she did apologize though. that was a cute story!
[Report This]Date: 05-15-09 - 06:31 am Title: Not Ticklish
Uh, hem....Just to let you ladies know, that hurts. A lot! I mean a hell of a whole lot. I mean I could make a 13 page tangent on how much that hurts and it would never be clear enough.
Anyway, despite the whole Vulcan death grip incident..uh.. "cute" story I suppose. Granted that Storm is painted as a sadist here, but I guess that's besides the point.
Author's Response: I know I should have gone into further detail to get across the point of how much it hurts. I played goal in hockey for years, and even a shot off the jock was enough to cause my stomach to turn and my eyes to water.
As far as Storm grabbing Wolverine's twig and giggleberries, I should point out there is a completely different second half of the story that I replaced with this. It's much more serious, and was kind of a drag.
Plus, Wolverine does heal quickly, just not THAT quickly in THAT area. Or that's how my interpretation is, coming from the line from the ringer in the first movie.
[Report This]Date: 05-14-09 - 10:00 pm Title: Not Ticklish
strange way of apologizing, indeed...poor Wolvie. I've gotta hand it to him, though, most guys would be too distracted by a sore pair of nards to notice that a woman had pretty eyes.
hopefully she'll make it up to him.
Author's Response: Are you implying that a sequel might be appropriate? If so, there might be one. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05-14-09 - 10:35 am Title: Not Ticklish
This was cute.
Author's Response: It was intended to be so. Thanks for reading and responding.
[Report This]Date: 05-13-09 - 10:20 pm Title: Not Ticklish
HOT!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
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