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Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-09 - 02:15 pm Title: II

I liked it. It's very AU, but it flows nicely.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-09 - 03:36 pm Title: II

lot of minor original characters...usually that drives me away from a fic, BUT you also have Piotr dating Remy in this one, and I love my slash!

Interesting to see Logan and Ororo as kids in this. That's rare in RoLo. BW has a really cute story that starts with RoLo as kids in it on this site, I forget the title, but it's funny. Digital Tempest also has one with them as teenagers that's priceless, you MUST read that one if you haven't yet.

Ororo's quite the Renaissance woman, isn't she? She can do everything! I also like that Logan has an education in this.

Reviewer: Starnoble03 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-03-09 - 10:59 pm Title: Part I

Muy interesante...I cant to wait and see what he wants to go back too...I actually started writing a time piece myself, but wont post it until I finish my current fic. Nice set up...Im not gonna lie...I had to look up "ostentatious" though...Good word I think I'll use it in a sentence tomorrow and add it to my arsenal of vocabulary words...lol

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-09 - 12:35 pm Title: Part I

I read this over at ff.net but I didn't review because I was a little confused. I'm not at all sure who's who or what's what or where you're going with this but I am curious as it's totally unique and unique is what I enjoy most.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-09 - 06:39 pm Title: Part I

so, is this Logan actually Logan Jr.?

I like the different tack you're taking with the time-traveling RoLo. Most "One Man's Worth" based stories are derivative and done to death, with rare exceptions. But you gave this one a good angle already. I also love any story with Forge in it. It's odd to see him helping the man who you kind of think of as Forge's romantic rival for Ororo, too.

one nitpick: change "unused" to "disuse." do a Word search for it in your document.

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