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Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-28-11 - 05:13 pm Title: Feelings

Okay, Google translator isn't the best I realize, but here's a rusty translation of Storm and that other's guys conversation in order from "Feeling it.." to "You won't..."

"Hisia sasa, bitch?"

"Kupoteza kudhibiti?"

"Kamwe."

"Kama tulikuwa mahali popote, basi bila ya kufa."

"Wewe si kutolewa hali ya hewa juu yangu?"

Really nice Story. I definitely enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Ladyluck523 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-10 - 05:38 am Title: Feelings

I can see these events and their slowly building relationship after Alcatraz. It seems within character and it's an interesting take that the man who raped Storm would come back for revenge. Of course it's fun seeing Wolverine all protective. I'd love to see the relationship develop even more in the coming chapters. I see you haven't updated in some time so I hope you haven't abandoned this fic. Please continue!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-09 - 01:33 am Title: Feelings

**hope

sorry, type-o. lol.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-09 - 01:32 am Title: Feelings

WOW! that is all i can say! i really really really love this story! hoe you update soon! can't wait!

Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-17-09 - 08:56 pm Title: Feelings

Great update! Took you long enough, just kidding! I loved it, you are a great writer and I am enjoying this fic. I meant to leave you a review earlier, but I kind of got sidetracked! Anyway, awesome job!- Amber

Author's Response: Itscool. And I realize it's been a while since I've updated, but I've been going through some stuff so I promise to get back on track with writing! Its people like you that encourage me! Thanks so much :D

Reviewer: freebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-09 - 03:28 pm Title: Storms

i just read your story and i cant for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-09 - 05:12 pm Title: Storms

Wait, where did Kuhio go? He's still out there waiting for the right moment to get to Storm!

Author's Response: OH, no the kids got him! Just wait!

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-09 - 05:10 pm Title: Storms

Love it, update soon. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-09 - 12:11 pm Title: Storms

dang. I hope Logan tears his ass up.

this was well plotted. only small nitpick is that Kitty doesn't morph, she phases. other than that, this was pretty fun to read.

Author's Response: Ok, I'll change that! Thanks for pointing that out! I'm not an expert so I'm glad I've got readers to help!

Reviewer: Pamdill Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-09 - 03:02 pm Title: Storms

Enjoying the story waiting to see where it goes to next

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-09 - 07:38 pm Title: Storms

i loved the first chapter...however, this one is even better! keep writing please.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm going out of town this week so it wont be for another week or so.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-08-09 - 10:32 am Title: Fears

knew that guy was up to no good.

I'm enjoying this! I normally can't stand original characters in fanfic, or if so, only in low doses, but you've worked them in well.

That, and you brought in a fresh idea with this Mutant League, with someone besides Magneto finding and recruiting them, definitely nice for a change. It makes sense that they would come after Storm.

The dialogue gets better the farther you go along in this, even though it was pretty good to begin with. This is developing nicely. It's nice to see some real plot along with the RoLo action.

Author's Response: Thanks. I really loved this review. The beginnings are always hard to write!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-08-09 - 12:33 am Title: Fears

I'm surprise Logan didn't pick up on anything from Kuhio. At least the girl isn't Ororo's daughter.

Author's Response: LoL. When I first posted this on another site I had a lot of people thinking she was. And Logan doesn't trust him...but Ororo is trying to, so that makes all the difference.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-07-09 - 12:25 pm Title: Fears

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is half way done!

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-06-09 - 10:31 pm Title: Nightmares

love it....especially to exchange at the end. sounded straight of the comics.

Author's Response: thanks so much!

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