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Reviewer: Genesis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-09 - 01:18 am Title: Challenges...

LOL... this just gets better and better. LOVE LOVE LOVE your charcater rep for Ororo and the Gang.
Keep em' coming :)

Reviewer: T Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-09 - 08:04 pm Title: Careful What Ypu Ask For...

Oh, this is so good. More. More! I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-08-09 - 02:15 am Title: Careful What Ypu Ask For...

Whoo hoo! Just read this for the first time, and I am so glad you've updated it! This can be a really great story if you finish it. I can't wait to see how RoLo comes to be and what the kids will do w/ their new info on the X-men's mission. lol! I love that Alison knew the name of the strip joint right away too. :)

Keep up the great work! More more more of the interesting dialouge, plz!

Reviewer: Genesis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-08-09 - 12:08 am Title: Careful What Ypu Ask For...

I love this story. Its refreshing a read, as well written. I will looking forward to updates :)

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-07-09 - 09:15 pm Title: Past is Present.....

small boo boo on my part.

right after this line, there is an end tag missing.

You tell me 'what does it mean'.

there should be an italic end tag at the end of that line, so that the rest of the text in the story doesn't end up in italics. I will email you about that soon.

In the meantime, great chapter!

Reviewer: GhostAuthor Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-06-09 - 10:53 pm Title: Things that make you go

Pretty good for a beginner. That image was so funny I was in tears. I'm from Georgia myslef so if you ever need a Beta Reader send me a message

Reviewer: Floeva Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-06-09 - 12:31 am Title: Things that make you go

I think the story is great, especially since it is your first one. I can't wait till the next chapter comes out.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-09 - 11:52 am Title: If it Must Be Done....

it's good to see what this looks like with all the formatting in it. Nice work.

Now I need to go check out the Danzig video.

Reviewer: sonic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-09 - 12:04 am Title: Things that make you go

Wow, this is your first story?!? Cause it's pretty darn good so far! Can't wait ta see what happens ;)

Reviewer: victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-03-09 - 02:33 am Title: Tread Lightly...

wow another great chapter i loved how nervous and unsure logan was around ro whoo !!! love it

Reviewer: victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-03-09 - 02:24 am Title: If it Must Be Done....

Wow i absolutly love it please please keep it coming

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