
Date: 04-24-15 - 06:38 am Title: The lines that blur
Wow!!! I just discovered this story and it's amazing. Please continue it. I need to know who was watching and what's gna happen to both ororo's and Logan's

Date: 02-22-11 - 11:37 pm Title: The lines that blur
Wow what an awesome story!! My heart goes out to both sets of Logans and Ororos. How can they keep from going crazy with all that's happening, my head is spinning after reading all 8 chapters in one night!
I can't wait to find out who attacked Ro. Is there another doppleganger hanging around or a shape shifter. It's just all too intriguing!
I can't wait for more!

Date: 02-22-11 - 11:39 am Title: The lines that blur
So there's MORE, right? RIGHT???
So help me, after all this time, you grabbed me by the lapels and yanked me right back into this story and made me get absorbed into it. I love the Australia reference, something any RoLoer can appreciate, and it's funny that her counterpart got him a Taz shirt.

Date: 02-16-11 - 07:07 am Title: The lines that blur
I am a little scared of how awesome this is coming out to be. Geez. It's one thing to have a compelling storyline, it's another thing completely to have one that deals with alternate dimensions complete with alternate characters and said characters interacting on a chapter-by-chapter basis, without sacrificing their identities... If that makes sense at all. (bottom line, this fic is amazing.)
Can't wait for more! I'd love to see where the Logans and Ororos will take their relationships with their respective others.

Date: 07-22-10 - 01:02 pm Title: And then, there was light...
You know you could be a professional writer. Get paid to write. This story is fantastic, I love it and I can not find any mistakes. I rarely leave comments so... that demonstrates how much I like this story. Please continue. :)
Author's Response: Thank you Grayce, this review jogged my scattered memory and I am now excited to settle in with a cuppa and get to it. Thanks again for the positive words

Date: 05-04-10 - 12:26 am Title: Blood moon
Dayummmmmm! That's what I call suspenseful writing! Update soon please. :,D
Author's Response: Aaack, totally shelved and sadly forgot this story for a few months. I'm back on it :D
Author's Response: p.s Thanks for the great reviews :)

Date: 05-02-10 - 09:09 am Title: Between a rock...
Yay! I was hoping this fic would continue. It's getting good and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you!

Date: 01-10-10 - 10:25 pm Title: A peek into the rabbit hole...
Couldn't have said it better Cee!! I'm really digging this fic. Can't wait for more (hint). :D

Date: 01-09-10 - 07:13 pm Title: A peek into the rabbit hole...
Yessssssssss. This is made of WIN!! More please. I agree with every word Cee typed above me.

Date: 01-09-10 - 12:47 pm Title: A peek into the rabbit hole...
What gets me about evil Logan is how calm and collected he is, and how it took Ororo a while to even realize how much trouble she's in. That whole scene and dialogue was so well written because it was subtle but had this big buildup. Good Logan finding his claw marks on the walls was also pretty intense.
Great storytelling. Can't wait til you give us more.

Date: 01-05-10 - 04:01 pm Title: And then, there was light...
Ahh!! To end it there!! well, i'm not going to complain...MUCH...since I'm reading chp4 earlier than I expected to. I was waiting for an update through the Lounge email, and just happen to wonder if you were double posting here at the Realm. How lucky that you are!!! Yay! GREAT chapter! I can't wait to see how 'Good Logan' deals with his 'Bad Logan'! Update soon!! :)

Date: 01-04-10 - 03:39 pm Title: And then, there was light...
Yeah I'm going to need another chapter ASAP. :) Very well written!

Date: 01-03-10 - 10:01 am Title: And then, there was light...
Whoa, this is deep - yes, yes, yes please continue

Date: 01-03-10 - 04:28 am Title: And then, there was light...
Love your story, please continue.

Date: 01-03-10 - 12:10 am Title: And then, there was light...
WOW that was great and can't wait for the next chapter for real!