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Date: 02-01-11 - 09:26 pm Title: Intruder

ok so hawk is alive so why is cyrstal being so secreative about it????

Author's Response: Because she no one knows that she as a twin that doesn't have powers... they don't know yet anyway.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 09:17 pm Title: Mystery girl

damn hasnt storm been through enough and what is crystal hiding?????love this story

Author's Response: Crystal isn't hiding anything. She's still getting over losing her sister, and trying not to make it seem obvious.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 09:07 pm Title: Found and lost

damn that sick twisted scum sabertooth i am so glad logan them got her out of their and safely back to the mansion

Author's Response: Yeah, well this is a RoLo after all. lol.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 08:01 pm Title: Battle rescue

damn that sick ass sabertooth brutalizing storm uh just sick!!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry. Had to make it look good.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 07:50 pm Title: Think, attack, capture, retreat

ok so one of the girls is a muntant and the other one is not and want to get into xavier school damn just when i thought storm would have a small amount of piece here comes the evil calvary led by sabertooth to snatch her back damn what in the hell do they want with her as always excellent writing!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 07:44 pm Title: Who's the mutant?

so storm heard bits and pieces of the twins convo i hope they try to locate the twins

Author's Response: More like the twins find them

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Date: 02-01-11 - 07:42 pm Title: Battle for two and the old switcheroo

oh wow the twins saved storm whoo i love it!!! oh i hope storm find the note they left on her leg?????

Author's Response: Keep reading.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 07:37 pm Title: Fight for the Storm

damn sabertooth got storm uh how did logan and colossus fucked that rescue up damn and she was hurt when sabertooth took her

Author's Response: Keep reading.

Author's Response: Oh, and watch the language please.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 07:28 pm Title: Revelation

glad that storm knows that xavier is still alive well his mind is still alive but these twins want the location of that school bad but anywhoo i am liking this story.....

Author's Response: Thanks. Keep reading, and you'll understand why they want that location.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 07:23 pm Title: Desperate situation and strange news

hmm that was interesting how quickly magneto gave up storm location to the two girls hope they are only trying to find a safe haven and not looking to cause any trouble for storm or the other xmen

Author's Response: They are orphans.

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Date: 02-01-11 - 07:18 pm Title: New friends; Old enemies; the same team

ok interesting start i see storm has some saa and i like it...

Author's Response: Thanks. I sort of just started it exactly where X-3 left off.

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