Date: 06-09-12 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Dang Lady, I am so in awe of your talent for imaginative detail. Please don't leave us hanging for much longer. Heck of a piece of work so far.
Date: 04-09-12 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter 4
Sometimes I go back and reread things. This is just as gripping as the first time I'd read it. Leaving a review to say that if you're worried about people not reading, know that you have a reader that still wants more over here!
[Report This]Date: 08-19-11 - 08:49 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm soooo happy you updated, but i thought it was truly evil of you to stop it there!!
Are you kidding me?? Scott cheated on Ororo with Jean??
Author's Response: Lol. Another update is on the way. Cheated? Maybe...or it could be worse ;)
[Report This]Date: 08-12-11 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg!!! That was a such a good update. I loved Logan's little confession that he needed her. I was kinda hoping that she would wake up like sleeping beauty for him. Now I can't wait to see how the fight at the school turns out and what Ororo's powers will be.
Author's Response: Thanks for hanging in there with me. I hope to do this story justice and I don't have as much time as I use to. Although, slow moving....I'll never stop writing RoLo :)
Date: 07-07-11 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
you ended it here how could you how could you do this to me
Date: 07-07-11 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
you ended it here how could you how could you do this to me
Date: 06-23-11 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really like the story line and the emotions between Storm and Cyclop and Wolverine and Jean.
Date: 06-08-11 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is interesting; everyone's roles are switched up. It should be fun to see how everything comes together and whose relationships are true, especially now that Ororo's been drugged.
[Report This]Date: 06-07-11 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Ororo, she is having a REALLY tough night!
[Report This]Date: 06-06-11 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Had to review. This is really gripping. Your characterization is great. Don't leave me here, please post soon.
[Report This]Date: 06-05-11 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what changes Ororo will go through and who will standby her through this and who will throw her under the bus.
[Report This]Date: 06-02-11 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well you know from my ff reviews that I'm loving this story!
[Report This]Date: 06-02-11 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Keep going this is great.
[Report This]Date: 06-02-11 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Simply great! I have missed your story telling. Please post more as soon as you can. Love for RoLo has been sparse lately, but your work is awesome.
[Report This]Date: 06-02-11 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loving it!!!! Said as I am pouncing in my seat. :) I have missed the way you write flowing conversation between your characters. I know fill ins for actions, places etc. has to be added in, but I do so love a continual conversation flow. And to have the reversal of character relationship is brilliant. There is a particular story I love where Ororo is married to Scott, but he has died, leaving her to raise their two sons and a baby on the way. Can't think of the title at the moment, but I think utilizing him in connection to Storm is great. She has gotten the short end of the attention spectrum as far as I am concerned. Anyway I appreciate how you have not had to villanize Jean for Ororo to shine. Ok I know I'm long winded, just excited to see you writing RoLo again.
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