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Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-01-04 - 11:56 pm Title: Prt5

where's the next chapter?!?!? you can't leave us hanging like this!!!!!

Reviewer: xlf Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-04 - 03:10 pm Title: Prt5

so when you going to write some more of this??? XLF

Reviewer: Me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-04 - 02:02 pm Title: Prt5

Oh God!! Please write another chapter soon!!!

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-24-04 - 12:22 am Title: Prt5

OMG!!! This chapter was really good!!! Logan can walk again, which is good, but there are still some things that need to be acknowledge.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Toughspirit! Wait until you read the next chap! It's a doozy

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-04 - 10:03 am Title: Prt5

Story gets more intruing every chapter. Good stuff.

Author's Response: Thank u very much Anon, that means alot

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-03 - 06:13 am Title: Chp 4: Home

wow, my heart's beating really fast... next chapter, pleASE!

Reviewer: Neophyte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-02-03 - 03:44 pm Title: Consequences

Wow. I can't believe Logan could be so stupid or that Jean could be so vindictive (although I shouldn't be surprised at anything the Harpy does). Poor Ro and Cyclops (I don't often feel pity for Cyke, but damn). And what a cliff hanger!!!!!!

Reviewer: Mystic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-03 - 12:00 am Title: Deception

First of all I am loving this story. Second could Scott first humiliate Jean in front of the whole school and divorce her sorry ass. Then can Ororo kick Jean's ass up and down some railroad tracks. And after Jean has been throughly humiliated and thrown into a mental hospital for i don't know seven houndred years, can she die of something simple like gain green. Please pretty pretty please. This bitch needs to die. Then Logan can grovel for years and be incrediable towards Ororo and she forgives him but not after giving him some grief about it. Then they get married and have kids. Please. I am not trying to tell you how to write your story but I only ask of one thing, KILL THE BITCH JEAN. Tootals

Reviewer: WeatherWitch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-03 - 12:00 am Title: Deception

Oh My, that was so good, update this soon please. I am curious to know what excuse Logan has and if Oror will ever forgive him, Very good. Please hurry:) OWW

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-03 - 12:00 am Title: Deception

Ororo should kick Jean's ASS!!!!! Oh my God what a BITCH!!! Yeah Logan was a dog too, but jean...she's like Ororo's freakin sister:( BITCH!! Oh I love this Need More So PLEASE!!! Pari

Reviewer: Neophyte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-03 - 12:00 am Title: Deception

Wow. Ro needs to put a bolt of lightning in that bitches ass. She don't know who she messing with.....as for Logan......take about things that make you go hmmmmm! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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