
Date: 06-29-12 - 01:33 pm Title: The Next Generation
nice fic!

Date: 12-24-05 - 07:20 pm Title: The Next Generation
Girl sounds like alot of trouble.But i wish there was more to the story.

Date: 12-24-05 - 06:50 pm Title: Intro...
The story sounds pretty good so far i am looking forward to the rest. Two girls sounds like trouble.

Date: 02-13-04 - 07:59 am Title: The Next Generation
hey love it! So what's the story of this Creed-guy? I'd love to read more soon!

Date: 02-12-04 - 10:10 pm Title: The Next Generation
Uh-oh. A Creed and a....Logan?....Howlett?....Wolverine?.....whatever. Anyway this should be fun, if she does decide to go with Michael, I am sure a certain Canadian will NOT be pleased!!! Great story Pari...as always!!!

Date: 02-12-04 - 06:48 pm Title: The Next Generation
I agree with creed! at least with Nina going to the dance :D She could cause some trouble! lol

Date: 02-12-04 - 05:06 pm Title: The Next Generation
Yay! Mickey! Wanna hug him, and kiss him... ok, and his father too, lol. So, is Nina going to the dance? Cammon, she needs to go... Please?

Date: 02-12-04 - 04:01 pm Title: Intro...
I couldn't remember if I reviewed this or not--sigh...senility. Anyway, cute, cute, cute! Logan and Ororo married with kids is hilariously sweet.

Date: 02-08-04 - 10:39 pm Title: Intro...
Oh, I shouldn't love a story this much, but I do! For the love of all humanity--update! =D

Date: 02-04-04 - 10:45 pm Title: Intro...
Reminds me of my family...sigh, but without the supa cool powers. Still, awesome fic. Logan and Ororo with kids is hard to picture but cute to read.

Date: 02-03-04 - 08:44 pm Title: Intro...
Sigh, I can honestly say I have read and love every story you've produced here and at other sites. You are a master at writing. Update soon, okay?!! ^_^

Date: 01-30-04 - 11:50 am Title: Intro...
LOL! and cool story! Can't wait to see more and maybe the end of this story sometime...not very far of into the future.

Date: 01-28-04 - 06:21 pm Title: Intro...
I know Star will agree with me in this. First... WOW!!!!!
Now to brass tacks: Your greatest gift is sucking the reader right inside the story, that's because your characters are wholly human and believable and because your dialogue flows unimpeded. Your style is essential and your use of stereotypes is both ironic and illuminating.
Of course the Queen of cliffhangers! Even if nothing had happened I'd still be panting for more!
Love you!
Dada
Author's Response: Wow...coming from you that means the world, thank you. Makes me so happy you enjoyed it so much:) And if I'm the Queen of Cliffhangers what does that make you, dada...lol. Love you too my sweet dada and Uncle too:)

Date: 01-27-04 - 10:46 pm Title: Intro...
Very funny, 2 sisters that don't get along too well. Both trouble makers. Maybe they can come to a truce and make trouble together, LOL.

Date: 01-27-04 - 02:18 pm Title: Intro...
Very cool start! Hope ta read more of it!