Reviews For WIP: Rememory
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Reviewer: friyourass Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-10 - 02:30 pm Title: One Shot

So are you ever gonna post this bad boy in it's entirety or am I gonna be legal first? DO WANT! Oh and Swahili Speaking Ororo=Bitchin'! Nuff said.

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-08 - 03:46 pm Title: One Shot

Wow! his is a really good fic.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-18-04 - 09:49 am Title: One Shot

i loved that!!! i loved the ending. amazing. i loVe the language idea. i lOve how you broght in 'ororo'. beautiful piece. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Nickel! Your opinion is worth WAAAAAY more than $0.02, $0.03... even $0.05 any day! (and when did they remove the cents glyph from QWERTY? Where was THAT memo?)

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-04 - 06:18 pm Title: One Shot

That was very lovely indeed:) I hope you do more:) Pari

Author's Response: Thank you, Pari. Your sentiments are very much appreciated!

Reviewer: bluemist418 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-04 - 03:12 am Title: One Shot

Oohhh....what a very cute fic! I hope you do update this. It's just so lovely. Never saw Ororospeak Swahili. UPDATE please!!

Author's Response: Muchas Thankas, Blue! I do hope you enjoy my finished piece, or at least the chapter in which this scene is placed. I look forward to your feedback. I am warmed and revitalized by it more so than my usual gallon of morning coffee. I hope everyone follows up with another set when you see it! (Smiles broadly, back of hand on forehead, unable to contain her euphoria)

Reviewer: AracTheDragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 09:43 pm Title: One Shot

Oh my goodness, *SO* cute! I love it! Very original, too, we don't see our beloved Ororo speak Swahili very much...or teach it to Logan either. (Once again, *SO* cute!) I personally love the language of Swahili, so please tell, where did you learn to speak it? Did you find some website to translate it, do you have a friend who's fluent in it, what? I must know! (If you don't mind explaining. *friendly smile*)

Author's Response: Thanks, AtheD! I don't know how to speak it but from my research I am starting to appreciate its beauty. My research was, of course, the web. If you do a general search for Swahili Kanga, you'll find a lot of euphamisms and folk phrases that are used. Of course, another general serach for Swahili Phrases will bump you into a lot of touristy sights that will give you the general "Hello" and "Where is the bathroom". Maybe I should try to find a way to fit in that last example into a story... hmmmm...

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 09:30 pm Title: One Shot

I loved it a lot. I thought it was funny, sweet, and sexy. And like Marikosan said even poetic. Hope you update A.S.A.P cause I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, ToughSpirit. (Cousin of 'Stands With Fist'? Hmm?) I really do want to post the story in its entirety but I am stuck on a couple of scenes. I am really to get feedback from all of you. I hope you do like it when I post. Please let me know!

Reviewer: Marikosan-7 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 06:25 pm Title: One Shot

Absolutely loved it!! Such beautiful use of language and sound...poetic even. I seriously can not wait to read more from you. A wonderful piece... M'iko,xx

Author's Response: Whoa... THE Marikosan! I'm a huge fan of your work. (Nem grabs a pen and a cocktail napkin and starts to furiously write... anything to please her!)

Reviewer: storm_the_windrider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 05:17 pm Title: One Shot

WONDERFUL, wonderful story!! Very original and intersting too. Great job, hope u write more stories. :) xxxxxxxx

Author's Response: 'Sanku, 'sanku! (Nem giggles inwardly)

Reviewer: Darlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-04 - 02:08 pm Title: One Shot

Oh my! This was very, very nice. Very sweet, very intimate. Nicely done. I would like to know what language it was they were speaking and what they were saying some of the time though. Never the less, a very nice piece.

Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review! Your point about following what is being said between the two in another language is well taken. I will keep that more in mind as I progress. And the language in use is Swahili (or at least my researched version of Swahili). Thanks again!

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